Friday, February 17, 2012

I Taste Nature In My Breath..

Written for Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart

I Taste Nature In My Breath..

Happy winter
slowly runs away;
spring in her feet..

Spring in her feet
gets loosened out;
falls on the earth

Falls on the earth
and makes flowers bloom;
hey, spring time, that!

Hey spring time that;
I taste nature in my
breath , with my eyes…

 *****

No more waiting;
gorgeous thoughts
of lovely spring..

 
RS :)
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13 comments:

  1. anthonynorthFebruary 17, 2012 at 7:52 AM

    And lovely words for lovely spring.

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  2. Maude LynnFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:08 AM

    Lovely write!

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  3. Helen CampbellFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:08 AM

    Wonderful haiku full of promise for spring!

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  4. carol l mckennaFebruary 17, 2012 at 9:19 AM

    Great haiku about spring ~ wish it were closer in New England namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ~ enjoy the weekend ^_^

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  5. Priti LisaFebruary 17, 2012 at 9:46 AM

    Absolutely, positively bursting at the seams SPRING!!!
    ♥♥♥

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  6. LauraFebruary 17, 2012 at 10:38 AM

    love the repetition of the word spring...well done!

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  7. peggy gattoFebruary 17, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    Beautiful words for hope and spring!!!
    I did some daffodils, a sure sign of spring!

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  8. LeaFebruary 17, 2012 at 12:31 PM

    So lovely, I felt like flowers were appearing and blooming all around me! My favorite the first... lovely images, all!

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 17, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    Spring's arrival (it's several weeks away yet) always leaves me breathless...


    Waiting for the Women

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  10. Rachana ShakyawarFebruary 17, 2012 at 7:09 PM

    There is a magic in the lines in the words :)
    Oh it feels like I got a spring trapped inside my woolen clothes :))

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  11. Fran aka RedondowriterFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:28 PM

    As always, Ramesh, truly masterful! How I love how you play with words.

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  12. rebeccaFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    your haiku are the perfect harbinger of Spring!

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  13. MaritFebruary 18, 2012 at 12:33 AM

    I have Spring in my hair (see my blog) - but I love the phrase 'Spring in my feet' too! Enjoy the change of seasons my friend!

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