Theme or Word: YOUR BLOG NAME
FORM: Haiku + Form of your Wish
FORM: Haiku + Form of your Wish
Joy and Pain Both
Walk Together
A little more
than Ordinary;
my story
My story;
can be shared in
a few words
A few words;
happy, sad and
joy and pain
Joy and pain
both walk together;
right and left
Right and left;
I keep friends and joys
on right side
On right side;
and left is left for
me alone
Me alone;
ah, I make my pain
smile with joy
Smile with joy;
pain is a very
special friend
Special friend;
so I care for it
a little more
A little more
than ordinary;
our story..
RS :)
To be concluded with the final Prompt
tomorrow…..
Very nicely penned (typed?) I loved the flow to this. I'm still puzzling over today's!
ReplyDeletewow.. very lovely..
ReplyDeleteExpertly crafted and nice, smooth flow to it. Love it!
ReplyDeleteVery nice pattern ~
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it ~
Nice work...it is always interesting to have someone comment about their blog name...yes joy and pain does walk together.
ReplyDeleteA little more than ordinary story, Ramesh - told in a deceptively simple yet poetic way that drew me in and made me want to know more - nice work indeed!
ReplyDeleteThis is really well done!
ReplyDeleteWell done Ramesh. This form is really you. You are the expert on this special form.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this and all your other entrances for The haiku Challenge.
A little more than ordinary, is you in truth. I enjoy reading your poetry so much. It has such a lovely flow.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Me alone;
ReplyDeleteah, I make my pain
smile with joy
Smile with joy;
pain is a very
special friend
Clever stuff!
Whoa! That's fantabulously, stupenderifically wonderbar!
ReplyDeleteAs someone else said, you leave us wanting to know more - the art of a good story.
ReplyDeleteYou are a great story teller in each form you use -- during this month, it seems cascading is your shining style ... and what is better than telling the tale of your blog name!! Nicely done, Ramesh!!
ReplyDeleteHere is my Day 28.
Ramesh. That's wonderfully heart-warming verse!
ReplyDeleteYour story is quite unlike any other, and yet, I think there are those who know exactly the tale you are telling.
ReplyDeleteMagical and Mystical
they do indeed. a soulful story unfolding in your words
ReplyDeleteWow!....Beautiful set of haiku....
ReplyDeleteMe alone;
ah, I make my pain
smile with joy
Smile with joy;
pain is a very
special friend
Loved these words a lot...
a little more than ordinary... beautiful...!
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