Monday, February 27, 2012

Joy and Pain Both Walk Together..


Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012
Day 28 – February 28th 
Theme or Word: YOUR BLOG NAME
 FORM: Haiku + Form of your Wish



 Joy and Pain Both
Walk Together

A little more
than Ordinary;
my story

My story;
can be shared in
a few words

A few words;
happy, sad and
joy and pain

Joy and pain
both walk together;
right and left

Right and left;
I keep friends and joys
on right side

On right side;
and left is left for
me alone

Me alone;
ah, I make my pain
smile with joy

Smile with joy;
pain is a very
special friend

Special friend;
so I care for it
a little more

A little more
than ordinary;
our story..

RS :)

To be concluded with the final Prompt
tomorrow…..

18 comments:

  1. Very nicely penned (typed?) I loved the flow to this. I'm still puzzling over today's!

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  2. Expertly crafted and nice, smooth flow to it. Love it!

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  3. Very nice pattern ~

    Enjoyed it ~

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  4. Nice work...it is always interesting to have someone comment about their blog name...yes joy and pain does walk together.

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  5. A little more than ordinary story, Ramesh - told in a deceptively simple yet poetic way that drew me in and made me want to know more - nice work indeed!

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  6. Well done Ramesh. This form is really you. You are the expert on this special form.
    Thank you for sharing this and all your other entrances for The haiku Challenge.

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  7. A little more than ordinary, is you in truth. I enjoy reading your poetry so much. It has such a lovely flow.
    Thank you.

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  8. Me alone;
    ah, I make my pain
    smile with joy

    Smile with joy;
    pain is a very
    special friend

    Clever stuff!

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  9. Whoa! That's fantabulously, stupenderifically wonderbar!

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  10. As someone else said, you leave us wanting to know more - the art of a good story.

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  11. You are a great story teller in each form you use -- during this month, it seems cascading is your shining style ... and what is better than telling the tale of your blog name!! Nicely done, Ramesh!!

    Here is my Day 28.

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  12. Ramesh. That's wonderfully heart-warming verse!

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  13. Your story is quite unlike any other, and yet, I think there are those who know exactly the tale you are telling.

    Magical and Mystical

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  14. they do indeed. a soulful story unfolding in your words

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  15. Wow!....Beautiful set of haiku....

    Me alone;
    ah, I make my pain
    smile with joy

    Smile with joy;
    pain is a very
    special friend

    Loved these words a lot...

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  16. a little more than ordinary... beautiful...!

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