Friday, February 10, 2012

Tree Waits for Offsprings



Written for Haiku Heights

Prompt # 106   DESIRE,
Thanks to  Vinati of "Mirage" for the prompt..



Tree Waits for Offsprings


Tree vainly desires
to keep them forever;
ripened fruits..

Ripened fruits
get detached by nature;
life’s hunger

Life’s hunger
as birds, man, animals
all nibble at them

All nibble at them
and scatter seeds around;
tree waits for offsprings…


RS :)
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11 comments:

  1. anthonynorthFebruary 11, 2012 at 12:54 AM

    The cycle of nature excellently described.

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  2. Tarang SinhaFebruary 11, 2012 at 1:17 AM

    A kind of poetic tale. This is really nice!

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  3. GraceFebruary 11, 2012 at 5:35 AM

    I like the way you weaved this cycle of life...very nice ~

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  4. carol l mckennaFebruary 11, 2012 at 6:47 AM

    Well done ~ very expressive and meaningful haiku ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. TeresaFebruary 11, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    What a lovely idea~the tree's desire to keep their fruit to ensure offspring.

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  6. GeraldineFebruary 11, 2012 at 12:56 PM

    I like them all Ramesh. You've done well with this prompt. :<)

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  7. Judith WesterfieldFebruary 11, 2012 at 9:09 PM

    Love the imagery Ramesh!

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  8. Adrienne and The WolfFebruary 12, 2012 at 4:46 AM

    I love this cycle- the seasons of desire...

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2012 at 3:41 PM

    A pleasing bouquet, Ramesh.

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    tree's offspring and by extension, man's offspring, too. I enjoyed this.

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  11. Vinay Leo R.February 16, 2012 at 4:20 AM

    Desire is cyclic. I agree!

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