Thursday, February 9, 2012

Miracle of Patience..



Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart

Miracle of Patience...

Mother pigeon
sits on eggs in balcony;
miracle of patience

Miracle of patience
amidst pots of flowers ;
flight of fresh wings

Flight of fresh wings;
sky’s waiting eagerly
to embrace twin joys..

RS:)
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14 comments:

  1. Jae RoseFebruary 9, 2012 at 11:59 PM

    I love mother pigeon..we all need a little of her patience..even the pace of your words..conveyed the calm she must have to find in order to hatch those eggs of new life..Jae

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  2. anthonynorthFebruary 10, 2012 at 12:48 AM

    That patience is vital. Nicely done.

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  3. MaritFebruary 10, 2012 at 4:10 AM

    I can easily picture mother pigeon in my head... I too have pigeons coming in my garden regurarely to see if they can build a nest yet - it's just too cold for that right now.. the patience is on me!

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  4. A Bit of the BlarneyFebruary 10, 2012 at 4:32 AM

    Thank you for this wonderful journey in words. And a lesson in patience as well!! Cathy

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  5. carol l mckennaFebruary 10, 2012 at 5:14 AM

    Excellent haiku ~ patience I am still learning ~ nature is a wonderful example ~~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) and HMH

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  6. rebeccaFebruary 10, 2012 at 6:04 AM

    so much joy here this morning ramesh!
    you too are leaning towards the promise of spring!

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  7. Maude LynnFebruary 10, 2012 at 8:43 AM

    Soothing and beautiful!

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  8. Priti LisaFebruary 10, 2012 at 8:48 AM

    Ahhh...a breath of spring's promise...wonderful♥♥♥

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  9. Susie ClevengerFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:51 AM

    Such beautiful words of patience...

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  10. LeaFebruary 10, 2012 at 10:23 AM

    I love how this captures time, and patience, in your nine lines... thank you!

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  11. Fran aka RedondowriterFebruary 10, 2012 at 8:57 PM

    I just adore the way you make each stanza's start the ending of the one before. Lots of pigeons here in Redondo Beach, too, but more seagulls.

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  12. Helen CampbellFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:47 PM

    Wonderful! I can see mother pigeon amid the flowers, awaiting the arrival of her young.

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  13. SpadomanFebruary 11, 2012 at 1:21 AM

    You paint a very nice scene with your pallet of words.

    Much peace to you my friend

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  14. *jean*February 11, 2012 at 7:40 AM

    so sweet, a moment of calm & observance...lovely work

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