Thursday, February 9, 2012

Miracle of Patience..



Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart

Miracle of Patience...

Mother pigeon
sits on eggs in balcony;
miracle of patience

Miracle of patience
amidst pots of flowers ;
flight of fresh wings

Flight of fresh wings;
sky’s waiting eagerly
to embrace twin joys..

RS:)

15 comments:

  1. I love mother pigeon..we all need a little of her patience..even the pace of your words..conveyed the calm she must have to find in order to hatch those eggs of new life..Jae

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  2. That patience is vital. Nicely done.

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  3. I can easily picture mother pigeon in my head... I too have pigeons coming in my garden regurarely to see if they can build a nest yet - it's just too cold for that right now.. the patience is on me!

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  4. Thank you for this wonderful journey in words. And a lesson in patience as well!! Cathy

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  5. Excellent haiku ~ patience I am still learning ~ nature is a wonderful example ~~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) and HMH

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  6. so much joy here this morning ramesh!
    you too are leaning towards the promise of spring!

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  7. Ahhh...a breath of spring's promise...wonderful♥♥♥

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  8. I love how this captures time, and patience, in your nine lines... thank you!

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  9. I just adore the way you make each stanza's start the ending of the one before. Lots of pigeons here in Redondo Beach, too, but more seagulls.

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  10. Wonderful! I can see mother pigeon amid the flowers, awaiting the arrival of her young.

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  11. You paint a very nice scene with your pallet of words.

    Much peace to you my friend

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  12. so sweet, a moment of calm & observance...lovely work

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