Friday, February 3, 2012

Marital Bliss!



Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 -
Day 4 – February 4th –
Theme: Opposite Emotions
also shared with Haiku Heights: Music..



 
Gleeful flowers
make butterflies grumpy;
overt gestures..
 
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She happily dances, 
he sits wearing ear plugs; 
marital bliss.. 
 
RS :)
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14 comments:

  1. becca givensFebruary 3, 2012 at 10:14 PM

    The 2nd one gives me a good chuckle -- thank you for that :)

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2012 at 10:16 PM

    Your second one reminds me of my husband's recipe for a happy marriage: separate holidays and increasing deafness.

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:23 PM

    Well done, nicely composed and with a smile.

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  4. Madeleine Begun KaneFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:56 PM

    Lovely haiku.

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  5. anthonynorthFebruary 4, 2012 at 12:55 AM

    The second one was great fun.

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  6. KarenFebruary 4, 2012 at 9:37 AM

    I'm the one wearing earplugs in my house! Great haiku.

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  7. AmberFebruary 4, 2012 at 9:59 AM

    Humour and wisdom combined! Nice! :)

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  8. Someone is SpecialFebruary 4, 2012 at 12:04 PM

    'marital bliss... ' ha ha.. Loved your take Rameshji..

    Someone is Special

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  9. Susie ClevengerFebruary 4, 2012 at 2:58 PM

    Ah marital bliss...lol love the words butterflies grumpy

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  10. TeresaFebruary 4, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    I love the second one~what a chuckle.

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 5, 2012 at 6:17 AM

    Are you a cynic, perhaps? :)


    Yes to the Music

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  12. Vinay Leo R.February 5, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    Well, maybe not with earplugs always, RS. sometimes the guy joins the wife in dance. :)

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  13. cherylFebruary 6, 2012 at 3:51 PM

    Enjoyed these Ramesh, giggling with the second one :)

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  14. ...February 7, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    The second Haiku gives an insight of perfect Indian married couple.
    Loved it. :)

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