Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 15 – February 15th – Theme: Paint the Image
Inspirational Image from: Google Images, Author: Unknown
Inspirational Image from: Google Images, Author: Unknown
Her Glorious Smile..
Her heart swallows
rainstorms and dusty winds;
a blissful soul
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A blissful soul;
rough weathers fail to steal
her glorious smile..
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Her glorious smile
beckons me to spread wings
rain-washed sky...
RS :)
Rameshji.. rain-washed sky, it conveys so much.. Loved your take.. I'm enjoying reading all great poets in this challenge.. PS: I will happy if you stop by my day 15 post once again.. You've a MP3 to hear..
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is the first Haiku; however, they are all lovely.
ReplyDeleteThese are all lovely...I especially love the first one!
ReplyDeleteLovely set...I like the rain washed sky ~
ReplyDeleteAll terrific, I like the first one best.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love the way your mind works! You seem to be a natural for the naisaiku style.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! The first one reminds me of my Grandmum and Mum. They do just that and each one is a blissful soul indeed.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing! :)
Beautiful set of Haiku,touching!
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Her glorious smile - this speaks volumes to me, well described!
ReplyDeleteThat glorious smile great. Love this set of haiku.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku :)
ReplyDeleteHeart swallows rainstorms
ReplyDeleteVivid and visceral imagery!! Thank you, Ramesh, for sharing your lovely thoughts!
especially liked the last, rain-washed sky
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