Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Her Dancing Feet..


Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 22 – February 22nd – Theme: Paint the Image...


Photo Clicked by Enosh of: Enosh Bansode Photography





Reflection
of a shining soul;
her dancing feet..

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Her dancing feet
make the world standstill;
frozen moments..

RS :)
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17 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanFebruary 21, 2012 at 11:13 AM

    The second line has a glowing sensitivity that lingers through the second haiku!

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  2. Vidya SuryFebruary 21, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    :-) I got a little alarmed when I saw Day 22... :-) even as I admired the haiku and the photograph! Phew! :-)
    Very nice, Ramesh!

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  3. AsniFebruary 21, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    One could fell in love with such feet!! Very nicely crafted haiku.

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  4. Maude LynnFebruary 21, 2012 at 6:09 PM

    I particularly like the second one!

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  5. Cressida de NovaFebruary 21, 2012 at 6:35 PM

    the second..a beautiful frozen moment!

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  6. ElleceeFebruary 21, 2012 at 7:07 PM

    My favorite is the second although both paint a lovely picture of the dancer.

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  7. zongrikFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:29 PM

    nice haiku

    three dancer senryu

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  8. SimranFebruary 21, 2012 at 10:31 PM

    Perfect! :)

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  9. vivinfranceFebruary 21, 2012 at 10:40 PM

    You have found the essence of haiku.

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  10. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 22, 2012 at 2:49 AM

    Love the line "make the world standstill" Really this is a nice haiku. The second verse I adore.

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  11. br!nDleFebruary 22, 2012 at 4:15 AM

    just awesome...:)

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  12. becca givensFebruary 22, 2012 at 7:31 AM

    LOVE love love it, Ramesh!! Well done!
    Here is my Day 22.

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 22, 2012 at 2:46 PM

    I like the tension between dancing feet and standing still. Nice juxtaposition of images!


    Painted Images here and here

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  14. sonsylassFebruary 22, 2012 at 3:10 PM

    Your words create a beautiful image to compliment a beautiful picture

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  15. Cloaked Monk/TerriFebruary 22, 2012 at 3:41 PM

    Great creation of tension with the stillness and the dance.

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  16. Andy SewinaFebruary 22, 2012 at 5:47 PM

    Her dancing feet
    make the world standstill;
    frozen moments..

    Nicely done!

    I'm sure I commented here earlier, I must have pressed the wrong button!

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  17. Someone is SpecialFebruary 23, 2012 at 2:50 PM

    'frozen moments' Rameshji.. :-)

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