Thursday, February 23, 2012

Topic of Gossip..


Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 24 – February 24th – Words: Dream Walks Thanks to Rachana Shakyawar of Humming Today because the phrase 'Dream Walks' was coined from her poem


Topic of Gossip..

Topic of gossip
for angels and the fairies;
her moony dream walks..

Her moony dream walks
hand in hand with her cupid;
bare feet on the clouds

Bare feet on the clouds,
her moistened lips quiver;
topic of gossip..


RS :)


Had writtten just the first one.. but added two more as they just flowed...

15 comments:

  1. Gossip topics often involve some bitter comments! That's when dreams can be elusive!

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  2. moony dream walks....love that. Nice work!

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  3. I like it, especially "her moony dream walks"

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  4. Moony dream walks ... what a great line. Thanks for sharing this nicely composed haiku.

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  5. Naughty angels and fairies! You've done only one set today. I was looking forward to reading more.

    By the way, thanks for your kind comments on my post yesterday.

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  6. Awesome Ramesh ... this complete chain of haiku ... love it. I am impressed that you are so good with this haiku form (ABC CDE EFA).

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  7. I love the addition of the last one!

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  8. Very nice! It feels more complete now. It's so not you to write just one, you know! ;)

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  9. Authentic dreamy walks: your take on the prompt is highly original.

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  10. Great fun and very original!

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  11. Topic of gossip for angels and fairies --- what an opening line! Another successful cascading Haiku, Ramesh!

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  12. beautiful flow Rameshji and I am glad you added those later.. Smiles..1

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