Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 24 – February 24th – Words: Dream Walks Thanks to Rachana Shakyawar of Humming Today because the phrase 'Dream Walks' was coined from her poem
Topic of Gossip..
Topic of gossip
Topic of gossip
for angels and the fairies;
her moony dream walks..
Her moony dream walks
hand in hand with her cupid;
bare feet on the clouds
Bare feet on the clouds,
her moistened lips quiver;
topic of gossip..
Her moony dream walks
hand in hand with her cupid;
bare feet on the clouds
Bare feet on the clouds,
her moistened lips quiver;
topic of gossip..
RS :)
Had writtten just the first one.. but added two more as they just flowed...
Had writtten just the first one.. but added two more as they just flowed...
I love the first two lines!
ReplyDeleteGossip topics often involve some bitter comments! That's when dreams can be elusive!
ReplyDeletemoony dream walks....love that. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteI like it, especially "her moony dream walks"
ReplyDeleteMoony dream walks ... what a great line. Thanks for sharing this nicely composed haiku.
ReplyDeleteNaughty angels and fairies! You've done only one set today. I was looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, thanks for your kind comments on my post yesterday.
wjat a moony twist
ReplyDeleteAwesome Ramesh ... this complete chain of haiku ... love it. I am impressed that you are so good with this haiku form (ABC CDE EFA).
ReplyDeleteI love the addition of the last one!
ReplyDeleteVery nice! It feels more complete now. It's so not you to write just one, you know! ;)
ReplyDeleteAuthentic dreamy walks: your take on the prompt is highly original.
ReplyDeleteNice pattern and set ~
ReplyDeleteGreat fun and very original!
ReplyDeleteTopic of gossip for angels and fairies --- what an opening line! Another successful cascading Haiku, Ramesh!
ReplyDeletebeautiful flow Rameshji and I am glad you added those later.. Smiles..1
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