Sunday, February 26, 2012

I Walk Out of Open Gate



Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 27 – February 27th – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work




I Walk Out of Open Gate

Open gate
makes me look beyond;
where am I?

Where am I?
 edge of a house-top,
sign of life  

Sign of life;
huddled dry leafs tell
tales of trees

Tales of trees;
 concrete slope leads to
dark alley

Dark alley;
 and I walk out of
 open gate..


RS:)


13 comments:

  1. Very nice...I did the same pattern like you...this is so fun to do.

    I like the optimistic share..from dark alley out to open the gate ~

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  2. This is lovely...You are going out the open gate...to me that is freedom

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  3. Having reached the end of your set, I am eager to find out what is in that dark alley! :)


    Paint the Image

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  4. Love the concrete feel to this pattern!

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  5. "I walk out of
    open gate..
    I like that very much as I also like all of your Haiku today. Always so special. Thank you.

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  6. Wonderful composed haiku and the pattern ... well you are the king on this pattern.

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  7. Very nicely done on a positive note.

    Looks like I am the only one not able to link up to today's challenge. The link is just not on the page to link up.

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    1. Manage to find the link from my blogger page!
      (Asni - A Walk in my Heart) aka InspiringAlways

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  8. Very aptly beautifully painted the image...I love the flow of words in all your haiku :)


    Open gate of your heart

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  9. You've looked beyond the obvious - well written, Ramesh!

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  10. Beautiful futuristic concept.Well penned.

    Thank you for visiting Poetic Ocean.

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  11. Nice weaving ... from the dark into the light of freedom. Well done, Ramesh! Here is my Day 27.

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