Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 27 – February 27th – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work
I Walk Out of Open Gate
Open gate
makes me look beyond;
where am I?
Where am I?
edge of a house-top,
sign of life
Sign of life;
huddled dry leafs tell
tales of trees
Tales of trees;
concrete slope leads to
dark alley
Dark alley;
and I walk out of
open gate..
RS:)
Very nice...I did the same pattern like you...this is so fun to do.
ReplyDeleteI like the optimistic share..from dark alley out to open the gate ~
This is lovely...You are going out the open gate...to me that is freedom
ReplyDeleteHaving reached the end of your set, I am eager to find out what is in that dark alley! :)
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Love the concrete feel to this pattern!
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I like that very much as I also like all of your Haiku today. Always so special. Thank you.
Wonderful composed haiku and the pattern ... well you are the king on this pattern.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done on a positive note.
ReplyDeleteLooks like I am the only one not able to link up to today's challenge. The link is just not on the page to link up.
Manage to find the link from my blogger page!
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Very aptly beautifully painted the image...I love the flow of words in all your haiku :)
ReplyDeleteOpen gate of your heart
You've looked beyond the obvious - well written, Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful futuristic concept.Well penned.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting Poetic Ocean.
Nice weaving ... from the dark into the light of freedom. Well done, Ramesh! Here is my Day 27.
ReplyDeleteNo words Rameshji.. Great write...
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