Friday, September 2, 2011

A Haiku Without Moon : )

Friday Mornings I wake up with a little bit of extra excitement.. for I remember, its a day for creating Haikus ..i.e a chain of Haikus for REBECCA'S HAIKU MY HEART..  and today when I woke up I decided to write a Haiku without Moon.. and see what happened...


A Haiku Without Moon : )


After giving it
A lot of thought, I write a
Haiku without Moon...

And you smile, because
You find the Moon shining
In the last line there

Ah, Moon just walks in
Without knocking, nudges me
With a soft moon beam

And I accept it
Hold it in my heart and mind
To share with you all

Hey, let me break it
Then, you pick up a piece, and
Hang it on a tree...

Here, here, I break it
Welcome, make a pick, each piece
Shines bright in your eyes

RS : )

Thanks for stopping by and picking up your share.. do comment to let me know if you enjoyed it...
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12 comments:

  1. A Bit of the BlarneySeptember 2, 2011 at 4:13 AM

    Ah! Decorating the trees with moonbeams...the child in me is dancing under the trees! Have a wonderful day and thank you for this adventure! Cathy

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  2. NankaSeptember 2, 2011 at 4:25 AM

    I have picked my gleaming piece which you freely share, no wonder Moon comes at your door so regularly!!
    Hey RS!! I miss the Elephant and Ant stories!! :)

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  3. SnapSeptember 2, 2011 at 4:52 AM

    Can't get away from the moon ... yippee! Dancing with the moon and moonbeams. Hang the pieces in the trees and SMILE! Yes!

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  4. Vinay Leo R.September 2, 2011 at 6:16 AM

    LOL :D Even without the moon, it had some moon in it, eh RS :) Lovely set.

    Hope to see you join it at the Challenge soon.. :)

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  5. somepinkflowersSeptember 2, 2011 at 7:16 AM

    here--->
    i will give you more moons:

    bright moon
    blue moon
    bring back a moon
    for Ramesh!

    {{ OK,
    wait about 2 weeks
    and then
    go look
    out your window!
    i think my incantation
    might work...
    we will see.}}

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  6. rebeccaSeptember 2, 2011 at 7:57 AM

    you have filled me with utter delight ramesh! so generous you, so endearing and willing always to share all the beauty you see.

    you are always a bright offering in the flower chain of haiku my heart.
    so grateful you are here.

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  7. DianneSeptember 2, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    Thank you for my piece of the moon... I will cherish it.

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  8. LeslieSeptember 2, 2011 at 3:05 PM

    i like the idea of decorating with moonbeams :)

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  9. Margaret PangertSeptember 2, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    So sweet, Ramesh~ The moon always fills me with longing... Sharing slivers of moon beam is a beautiful image. Oh, seeing the moon in the dark with the silver-blue reflections of friends far away... Lovely, Ramesh.

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  10. Noelle ClearwaterSeptember 2, 2011 at 6:37 PM

    Ramesh--
    These haikus are lovely. I don't think that the moon needs to be totally absent from a haiku. Let's not be too hasty, but you have managed to create such a lovely and generous invitation of light for all, to share what I believe to be the inner light that you always carry with you my friend. I like the idea of breaking off a piece of moonlight, as one would bread for the hungry so that light will shine in the eyes of those who are in need of it.
    Peace and Light,
    Noelle

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  11. gmaSeptember 3, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    sometimes moonbeams come in the window but I don't see the moon at all.

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  12. MaritSeptember 4, 2011 at 3:10 AM

    You make me smile! Your haikus have the light of both the moon, the stars ánd the sun!

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