Saturday, September 3, 2011

Weeds Grow, I Remove Them..

Written for OSI and Haiku Heights..


Weeds grow, I remove
Them, but then they keep coming
Like negative thoughts…


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Beautiful roses,
Surrounded by weeds, Don't
We meet them, often..

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Here's especially for Haiku Heights Challenge…. Lets know more about  Elephant and Ant..

Just made for him, ant
Completes elephant, remove
Her, it's just ‘eleph’ ...


By  RS : )
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22 comments:

  1. mareymercySeptember 3, 2011 at 11:40 PM

    We do meet the roses often, surrounded by weeds - it's kinda like having a blog!

    Lovely haiku.

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  2. GeraldineSeptember 4, 2011 at 1:24 AM

    so very true Ramesh!

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  3. Harshad MehtaSeptember 4, 2011 at 2:07 AM

    So true... like negative thoughts!

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2011 at 4:57 AM

    I thoroughly enjoyed these, especially the first one. So true negative thoughts and weeds, both keep coming back.
    I loved the elephant and ant one - such a clever play with the words.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2011 at 5:15 AM

    a part of life indeed...!

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  6. BeyondSeptember 4, 2011 at 7:57 AM

    thoughtful n fun at the same time

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  7. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 4, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    Ramesh, interesting Haiku. I liked them all but the one with the roses I liked the best. Well done my friend.

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  8. Vinay Leo R.September 4, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    Yes. Weeds do come bak like old past. Well said :)

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  9. JimSeptember 4, 2011 at 3:00 PM

    Good writing, Ramesh. I like the second one as fitting me. I just dread having a closeness encounter with weeds. :)
    ..

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 4, 2011 at 6:35 PM

    I keep hoping for redeeming words to say about weeds, but...

    Day 4: Corn in the Wash

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  11. ScarletSeptember 4, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    I like the weeds haiku...specially the first one being negative thoughts.

    And you last one is fun and creative ~

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  12. ArielSeptember 4, 2011 at 7:28 PM

    Ou thoughts can be compared with weeds. We've to clear them once in a while.
    Your haiku is so simple yet thought provoking.

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2011 at 8:52 PM

    you did great with the "weed" prompt and the last line what a great twist!

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 3:11 AM

    You're good at haiku, aren't you? :)

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  15. NankaSeptember 5, 2011 at 9:29 AM

    Loved both Haiku! A nice twist to the tale in the first one. I don't mean the elephant's tail! :)

    My OSI Post - Dandelions

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  16. TeriSeptember 5, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Very thoughtful verse. You always write with great feeling.

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  17. The Write GirlSeptember 5, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    Two wonderful poems Ramesh...the haiku made me pause and reflect. Clever play on words.

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  18. LisaSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    Very true statements Ramesh!

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  19. CherylSeptember 6, 2011 at 4:55 AM

    I love the analogies in both weed haikus. Eleph-ant is just fun.

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  20. PattiSeptember 7, 2011 at 7:22 AM

    Oh yes- negative thoughts are very much like weeds- have to keep removing those, don't we? Please stop by mine!

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  21. PremISeptember 9, 2011 at 2:00 AM

    Hmm...we do meet them often.
    Nicely written!

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  22. MarilynSeptember 9, 2011 at 8:00 AM

    The rose one made me think and the elephant made me smile.

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