Sunday, September 25, 2011

Phoenix Inspires..



The Height of Haiku Challenge Day 26
Prompt : Phoenix


For my Elephant and Ant Haiku, 
I have picked up the meaning of Phoenix as : 
A person or thing of unsurpassed excellence or beauty; a paragon.

Elephant is struck
Reading, doesn't know meaning
Of phoenix, asks Ant..

Happy Ant tells him; 
For her Elephant has always
Been a true phoenix..

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Here the meaning taken is:  A bird in Egyptian mythology
that lived in the desert for 500 years and then consumed itself by fire,
later to rise renewed from its ashes.


Phoenix inspires,
Else, stories of man's rise from
Ashes won't exist..


 RS : )

11 comments:

  1. love this story!!! the elephant and ant ... strength is one of those mystical properties that longs for expression...

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  2. I was once told that sometimes we have to let something die, so that something new will rise out of it, I think of the Phoenix when I ponder these words.

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  3. I am a cricket fan RS!! and so....

    Phoenix inspires,
    Else, stories of man's rise from
    Ashes won't exist..

    Aussies and the Brits
    Compete to win the Ashes
    Phoenix inspires

    Today the challenge is Ant and Elephant exclusive I see!! :)
    Elephant is stuck
    Reading, doesn't know meaning
    Of phoenix, asks Ant..

    Happy Ant tells him;
    For her Elephant has always
    Been a true phoenix..

    War of words wins ant
    Eleph gives in to please her
    True phoenix rise

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  4. A person or thing of unsurpassed excellence or beauty; a paragon.

    Elephant is struck
    Reading, doesn't know meaning
    Of phoenix, asks Ant..

    Happy Ant tells him;
    For her Elephant has always
    Been a true phoenix..

    War of words wins ant
    Eleph gives in to please her
    True phoenix rise

    Ant has bright idea
    "Arizona, here we come!
    Let's find real Phoenix"

    While Elph packs their trunks
    Ant makes itinerary
    Buys new travel clothes

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  5. The ant and the elephant continue...the mark of true friendship when one can admire and state the strength of another...yes the Phoenix inspires...we can rise from the ashes of adversity

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  6. Phew, I think elephant is inspirational today!

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  7. Elephant is struck
    Reading, doesn't know meaning
    Of phoenix, asks Ant..

    Happy Ant tells him;
    For her Elephant has always
    Been a true phoenix..

    War of words wins ant
    Eleph gives in to please her
    True phoenix rise

    Ant has bright idea
    "Arizona, here we come!
    Let's find real Phoenix"

    While Elph packs their trunks
    Ant makes itinerary
    Buys new travel clothes

    Like a star Ant shines
    In her good clothes attractive
    Got to please her sweet

    To rock'n roll beats
    Eleph sings to jiving Ant
    Yeah baby oooh! yeah!!

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  8. Beautiful....love this story... the elephant and ant .. so nicely done!!

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  9. Lovely set ... I enjoy the continuation of the elephant and ant!

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  10. Ramesh, I enjoyed both of your poems for this prompt; well done taking on both meanings of the word.

    And Nanka, what was that you said on my blog about not having creativity and imagination? That was a great continuation you and Judith collaborated on with Eleph and Ant. :)

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  11. I'm glad those two lovers have such a good relationship!

    Can you see a phoenix here or here?

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