Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Hypnotic Gaze, ah!



Haiku Heights Challenge : Day 07 Prompt... Hypnotic..




“Hypnotic voice!”
And he talks and talks, loses
Voice with in no time…

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Sun sinks in the sea
Moon walks in, stars sing, nature’s
Hypnotic gaze, ah!

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And the tale continues...
Hypnotic walk of
Elephant, all the Ants feel 
Jealous of their friend..


By RS : )

13 comments:

  1. I can picture that elephant walk...but where was the elephant's ant when the others were watching RS?

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  2. I like the first two .I interpret the first as the one he talks himself to sleep if I am right ...

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  3. An ongoing, droning voice can create a hypnotic state of sleep!

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  4. Nature's hypnotic gaze - the very stuff of life, perhaps.

    Nicely!

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  5. Like the nature hypnotic gaze.. and that series is so fun to read....

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  6. I confess, I'm hypnotised by your ant/elephant saga :)

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  7. Another great elephant and ant moment/

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  8. You're getting your mileage out of the elephant and ant, my friend! Keep going!


    Hypnotic Meadow

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  9. My friend I loved all three of your haiku. Wonderful read.


    Melanie

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  10. I liked the second one! Really hypnotic.

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  11. I am so addicted to the ant and elephant this was wonderful!

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  12. I can imagine being hypnotized by a voice :) Well writ!

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