Sunday, September 4, 2011

Powerful Entertains Ego..



Written for the Haiku Heights Challenge Day 5... Flourish


Decimates others
With a flourish, powerful
Entertains ego…

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And the story continues..


Elephant carries
Ant on his back; she's up in
A half-hour flourish



By RS : )
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7 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaSeptember 5, 2011 at 2:41 AM

    I like the bit about the elephant and the ant, there's a BIG thought in there.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 3:10 AM

    Two excellent haiku, but I like the second one best.

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  3. NankaSeptember 5, 2011 at 3:28 AM

    The ego playing games again RS!! ......and with a wave of flourish the ant takes a ride :) kind of the elephant to take her around!! :D

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    "Decimates others with a flourish" = great line!

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 5, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    How long will the elephant flourish, carrying the ant?

    Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2011 at 10:17 AM

    your first has such a humanistic approach you identify with people so well in your poetry. Loved the ant/elephant again!

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  7. Vinay Leo R.September 7, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    a flourishing ego is never good for any one I htink..!

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