Sunday, September 4, 2011

Powerful Entertains Ego..



Written for the Haiku Heights Challenge Day 5... Flourish


Decimates others
With a flourish, powerful
Entertains ego…

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And the story continues..


Elephant carries
Ant on his back; she's up in
A half-hour flourish



By RS : )

7 comments:

  1. I like the bit about the elephant and the ant, there's a BIG thought in there.

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  2. Two excellent haiku, but I like the second one best.

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  3. The ego playing games again RS!! ......and with a wave of flourish the ant takes a ride :) kind of the elephant to take her around!! :D

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  4. "Decimates others with a flourish" = great line!

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  5. How long will the elephant flourish, carrying the ant?

    Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here

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  6. your first has such a humanistic approach you identify with people so well in your poetry. Loved the ant/elephant again!

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  7. a flourishing ego is never good for any one I htink..!

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