Friday, September 2, 2011

Windmills Move...



Written for Haiku Heights challenge.. Prompt # 3   WINDMILL

From quite a distance
I feel presence of ‘power’
Moving windmills tell..


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Continuing with the story of the couple....


Windmills tell speed of
Winds; fearful elephant hides 
Ant, stands over her...


RS  : )
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9 comments:

  1. NankaSeptember 3, 2011 at 12:47 AM

    Good to see the Elephant and Ant are friends again RS!! lol!! Windmills spell power and energy ..so true!!

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  2. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 3, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    Nice Haiku Remesh. Well written.


    Melanie

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    I particularly like the elephant and ant one. Foolish elephant, kindly ant.

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  4. Short PoemsSeptember 3, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    Great haiku as always, Ramesh :)

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 3, 2011 at 1:00 PM

    Yes, even from a distance windmills speak of power. I had forgotten. Thanks for the reminder!

    No Windmill Here!

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  6. andy sewinaSeptember 3, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    Yeah, I feel the power too!

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  7. Vinay Leo R.September 3, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    I'm just trying to picture the itty bitty ant standing over the elephant, Rameshji :D Its so funny.. good to see the duo back at it again :)

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    love it Ramesh the any and elephant is so cute keep those two together please!

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  9. TraciBSeptember 12, 2011 at 1:45 PM

    I guess I'm reading it differently, because I see Elephant standing over Ant, hiding her out of fear for her safety.

    Either way, terrific pair of haiku. :)

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