Sunday, September 11, 2011

The Wise Pounce on Me


The Height of Haiku Challenge Day 12 Prompt: Flood


One little mistake
Attracts a flood of advice
The wise pounce on me...

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Elephant and Ant
Watch moon, flood of emotions
Keeps them sombre, night flows..


RS : )

12 comments:

  1. So they do.. people like giving it more.

    Full moon and the night flows ~

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  2. Advice often given with love, does not always work. Nice work. I see the ant and elephant and the ant are still buddies.

    Melanie

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  3. Yes there are those who are always there to give their advice, but not their forgiveness..

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  4. if only we could live like the elephant and ant, together, forgiving...

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  5. Elephant and Ant
    Watch moon, flood of emotions
    Keeps them sombre, night flows..

    Ah, dawn of time breaks
    trunk and antennae entwined
    watching the sunrise.

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  6. Love the first one here - very easy to relate to the situation and you catch it.

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  7. Advice is always free flowing :) one can get drowned in them!! :)

    Progression of night
    Elephant turns on his side
    What happens to ant?

    No sombre night for these two irrepressible pranksters :D LOL!!

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  8. I guess you are right...people who give advice think they are wise, and they literally, not figuratively, POUNCE on you. Haha, I like this haiku. It serves as a reminder to me not to give advice when it is not asked for.
    Rosie

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  9. I loved the first one.
    It never fails to amaze me just how many wise people I know.

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  10. Gotta watch out for those wise people, Ramesh!




    Floods here and here and here

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  11. the elephant and ant - bonding duo!!

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  12. Mom and dad.. yep, wise pounce on me for my mistakes too! :(

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