Monday, September 5, 2011

Infant Opens Eyes..


Haiku Heights Challenge.. Day 06  Promp: Kiss..
Two contrasting takes, today..

Infant opens eyes
Sick mother craves to kiss, holds
Temptation; Oh, God!


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Carrying on with the tale.. as long as I can..

Elephant wants ant
To kiss him, she starts climbing
Gets tired, sleeps in ear..


By  RS : )

17 comments:

  1. Beautiful sensitivity in the first haiku and some quirky fun in the second!

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  2. Cool! I'll second what Gemma said.

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  3. I agree with Gemma and Andy; but, Ramesh, what I always enjoy most are your funny and whimsical pieces! They are so charming.

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  4. There may be reasons why the infant could not be kissed. A pity! The elephant is too hazardous a journey to climb? Beautiful verses!

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  5. love the second one, understand the first one, so hard when that happens

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  6. The Elephant's Ant -- the best Haiku ever! Here's the untold story:

    Ant wants Elephant
    to kiss her, he starts looking
    and can't find her lips

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  7. :) :) the love of a mother beyond the depth of any ocean..

    i am loving this series of ant and elephant :P :D

    loved them both

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  8. I love both of them but your elephant/ant series is inspired.

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  9. ur first haiku reminds me when my kids were yet small and i've had colds and would not be allowed to kiss them...:(

    the ant and el...that's a very nice tale..:)

    wonderful haikus RS!

    promise to read the rest later...:)

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  10. Two great haiku.
    First one sad and poignant.
    Second one made me smile - delivering a kiss can sometimes be hard work.

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  11. Honestly you could start and ant/elephant blog I am loving every story you tell of them, this one was so much fun!

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  12. Must have gone to whisper sweet nothings into his ear RS!! :D

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  13. Tenderness in the first, and charming whimsical fun in the second! Well done ~~ :-)

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  14. The second one prompted me to laugh out loud. Charming!

    Kisses here and here and here

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  15. awesome take RS....I loved the first one...beautifully penned :)

    the second one...i laughed out loud ..!!!

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  16. The emotions of the mother are quite deep and beautiful.. your haiku got it right, RS! :)

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