Saturday, September 17, 2011

NOTEBOOK IS HAPPY...



The Height of Haiku Challenge…Day 18
and Sunday OSI Combined..

I have taken the liberty and tried to use all the fifteen prompts till
today as also last two prompts of OSI to create chain of haiku...
hope you will enjoy as much as I did while writing it…

NOTEBOOK IS HAPPY

Hypnotic mirror
Lo, kisses himself, yearns for
Elixir of youth

Smiles with a flourish
Chimes for more liberty, gets
Wintery response

Flood of emotions,
Add to hidden feelings, yet
Mind is no windmill

His forte ‘patience’
Makes him write, tries creating
Magic through haiku

Notebook is happy
Its existence justified,
No betrayals, none..

****

Well, they are still here:

Elephant and ant
Comfy in my page; getting
All the attention..


RS : )

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30 comments:

  1. Susie ClevengerSeptember 17, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    Wow!! What an accomplishment...You have created such beauty!! and glad to see the elephant and the ant are still here :)

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  2. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 17, 2011 at 2:14 PM

    Elephant and ant
    Comfy in my page; getting
    All the attention..

    Elephant and Ant
    Lovingly smile at Ramesh
    For the gift of life

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  3. AmitySeptember 17, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    This is just superb RS...from word to word, from line to line, from haiku to haiku...I love them all, Perfect!

    Now my fave characters aren't missed and they should be happy with the attention that Amity is giving them day in, day out!

    I tip my hats off to you!

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  4. SarasSeptember 17, 2011 at 6:37 PM

    A good one Ramesh Ji

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  5. Harshad MehtaSeptember 17, 2011 at 9:33 PM

    Superb!

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  6. NankaSeptember 17, 2011 at 9:57 PM

    LOL!! RS!!You have such a creative mind RS!! You have done justice to all the prompts once again!! Great idea and loved what you have done today!! As always the best is reserved for the last!! ...and they have settled well :D

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  7. vivinfranceSeptember 17, 2011 at 10:35 PM

    Now that's what I call productivity. I'm always pleased if I can combine 2 prompts in one poem - but you take the crown for this series.

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  8. LSHSeptember 17, 2011 at 11:59 PM

    and it is YOU who has made my day better!!! love the elephant and the ant especially. but also, what a clever combination of all the prompts!

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2011 at 12:19 AM

    There is a completely different feeling - a real sense of flow and pace - to these compared to stand alone haiku. It's a very different effect and good fun.

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  10. KalyanSeptember 18, 2011 at 1:23 AM

    lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

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  11. knot2shareSeptember 18, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    This is fabulous, trying to incorporate all the prompts so far..Fantastic effort Ramesh ji. Also, glad that the elephant and the ant are part of it still. Kudos!

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  12. Gemma WisemanSeptember 18, 2011 at 4:28 AM

    A kaleidoscope of feelings and ideas that sparkle in the haiku form! And I too am glad that the elephant and ant are still hanging around with a story to tell!

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  13. GraceSeptember 18, 2011 at 6:43 AM

    Whew what a challenge to weave all those prompts...I like it all ...warm applause (not wintery response) ...

    magic haiku indeed....*claps* for the elephant and ant bowing *smiles*

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2011 at 8:22 AM

    Well done. I really enjoyed -
    Hypnotic and Notebook.

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  15. The Write GirlSeptember 18, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    15 Prompts in one poem. I'm impressed. Bravo!!

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  16. aayanmanSeptember 19, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    Was this a rank spontaneous effort or was it carefully designed? Either way it is amazing.!

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  17. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 19, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    brilliant..

    :)

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  18. PattiSeptember 20, 2011 at 11:05 AM

    FANTASTIC!!! I really loved your personal challenge- it totally worked! "tries creating
    Magic through haiku"- Oh yes YOU DID!

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  19. KaySeptember 22, 2011 at 4:22 AM

    Wonderful achievement. Congratulations!

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  20. Marbles in My PocketSeptember 22, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    You've put together another string of good ones that compliment each other so well, Ramesh. Very nice!

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  21. Ann LeFloreSeptember 22, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    So well done and a great achievement in such a great piece. Love your closing about the elephant and the ant still being there getting all the attention
    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/09/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week_21.html

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  22. The Orange TreeSeptember 22, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    whaT A enjoyable note.

    enjoyed your creativity.

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  23. maritSeptember 23, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    I love haiku! you make it look easy

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  24. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    Very nice haiku
    I also enjoy this style
    Check out my entry

    http://wp.me/s1LMFk-749

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  25. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2011 at 7:50 AM

    Made me smile. Very cute:)

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  26. Classic NYerSeptember 28, 2011 at 3:46 PM

    Made me smile too! (Magdalena stole my sentiment, haha!)

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  27. yulistya deySeptember 29, 2011 at 6:26 AM

    I'm sure that you really enjoy in writing, because your haiku brings the joy and excitement in the air! :)

    Happy rally.

    http://dhitermination.wordpress.com/2011/09/27/endless-fog/

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  28. The PoetSeptember 29, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Hello Ramesh.
    This is creativity at its best!

    Nicely done, my friend!

    Thanks for sharing.

    Your Song Of Love

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  29. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2011 at 5:02 AM

    This was such a beautiful read, I read it twice, bookmarked it and now following u!

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  30. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    Very clever and full of different emotions! Well done!

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