Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Will Death Be A Betrayal?



Specially for OSI... Betrayal.. my 2nd contribution...
first was combined with Haiku Heights..challenge..

Will Death Be A Betrayal?

We wake up
Ah, betraying sleep
We betray laughter
When we weep

Day will unfold itself
Strand by strand
Betryal and trust shall
Move hand in hand

Will death be a betrayal
Of this one life
Perhaps, but only if
We have been alive

Fresh  dreams,
Scream betrayals ahead
Broken ones tell
We are already dead

All said and done
I want to be fully alive
Stabs in the back
Won't let me die

I'll become stronger
With every passing day
I will continue to trust,
Let anyone betray..

Your trust in me
I will dearly hold
Natural betrayals
Ah, bless me God!

( This is an inspired poem...inspired by Teri C.'s post..)



RS : )

5 comments:

  1. Wow Ramesh, this is so beautiful! I'm happy to have inspired you to write this. wow

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  2. Beautiful thoughts and strongly positive RS!!
    wonderful lines these ~

    "I'll become stronger
    With every passing day
    I will continue to trust,
    Let anyone betray.."

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  3. Getting past betrayal is not easy, for sure. Great stuff.

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  4. "Betrayal and trust shall
    Move hand in hand"

    Two sides of the same coin.

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