Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Perfect Rhythm..



Height of Haiku Challenge : Day 29
Prompt : Rhythm


Universe sings in
Perfect Rhythm, I try vainly
To catch divine notes..

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Who says elephant
Can’t dance; he succeeds, catches
Ant’s rhythmic steps..

RS : )

8 comments:

  1. The Universe seems to sing 'catch me if you can' :)

    Who says elephant
    Can’t dance; he succeeds, catches
    Ant’s rhythmic steps..

    Together were poised
    Tries to do a piroutte
    Did he then align?

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  2. Elephants seem to have a great sense of rhythm.

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  3. Great work as always...and I would love to see the elephant dance :)

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  4. What a nice haiku you made on the prompt of today. And ... I would like to see the elephants dance.

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  5. Yeah, I like the idea of the universe singing!

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  6. Love the idea of reaching for divine noes! And the elephant continues to be cute!

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  7. Oh, I love to see Elephant dancing!



    Rhythms here and here

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  8. The first one is just great RS...:)

    But the ant and eleph? wow...wow...:)

    I could just imagine!

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