Sunday, February 12, 2012

DREAM GIFT FROM ELDERS

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 13 – February 13th – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Someone is Special of Few Miles




DREAM GIFT FROM ELDERS

For this, I look at the prompt as a round white globe..

I will paint it bright
with colours of my smile;
dream gift from elders..

Dream gift from elders;
borderless and fearless
a whole new earth…

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And here I look at as a baloon..


I'll touch Moon;
 just let me release
the baloon..

RS:)



18 comments:

  1. Rameshji, I loved your Haiku set a lot.. SmileS.. Thanks..

    Someone is Special

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  2. Nice set...I like the repetitive lines ~

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  3. "I will paint it bright
    with colours of my smile"

    Loved the promising lines and the affection. :)

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  4. Rameshji I loved the newly added haiku. Thanks thanks thanks! Regarding the Naisaiku post I will read them in the evening because I'm not feeling well and I slept earlier :-(

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  5. Lovely haiku.....Last one was my favorite...:)

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  6. Love these series of haiku. I espsecially like the third one.

    Namaste

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  7. I loved the addition

    'I'll touch Moon;
    just let me release
    the baloon..'

    Such a innocent asking. :)

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  8. Very interesting take on it as a round white globe. Love the second haiku.

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  9. I remember when I was little a movie called "the Red Balloon." The travels that it took all over the place. You reminded me of that memory with the balloon going to the moon. Thanks!

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  10. Wonderful haiku and that little child is precious

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