Saturday, February 11, 2012

FIRST STROKE OF BRUSH...







Also shared with One single Impression
thanks to Harshadji for the prompt VITAL


FIRST STROKE OF BRUSH...


Beautiful painting
sliding down a rainbow
joyous stars arrive
Beautiful painting
joyous stars arrive
sliding down a rainbow
Beautiful painting
 
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Beautiful painting
vital link in the middle
first stroke of brush
Beautiful painting
first stroke of brush
vital link in the middle
beautiful painting..
 
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Beautiful painting;
I see the face of painter
smiling in colors
Beautiful painting
smiling in colours
I see the face of painter
Beautiful painting..
 
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Beautiful painting
I stand mesmerized
sparkling in light
Beautiful painting
sparkling in light
I stand mesmerized
Beautiful painting..

My first attempt on Naisaiku.. when I started I didn't know what I will do.. that's when I picked up two lines of one of my most viewed haiku on my page here..as per official statistics.. JOYOUS STARS ARRIVE.. and then it flowed.. I am happy to see what has come out.. I find your good wishes and emboldening comments shine in each word here.. thanks   friends... hope you too enjoyed this...

RS :) 

19 comments:

  1. so beautiful...such a creative way to get inspiration for your poem

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  2. Lovely line...smiling in colours! The whole becomes a mesmerising effect reflecting your ideas! Delightful!

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  3. Just lovely! Your poem flowed just as paints from a brush.

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  4. So beautiful painter and writer..:)

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  5. Wow....Loved it....Feel as if I'm reading about myself...I love painting :)

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  6. Inspired. I'm glad I didn't read this before attempting my own humdrum naisaiku!

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  7. Ramesh - I love the sound and the imagery of:

    sliding down a rainbow
    joyous stars arrive

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  8. Excellent imagery in these. Naisaiku can be fun.

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  9. Smiling in colours - that's the most beautiful line ever. perfect discription

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  10. Beautiful painting!! Wonderfully done!

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  11. beautiful painting...beautiful poem!

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  12. Beautiful and mesmerising!! Loved it! :)

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  13. That sounds so happy! :-) Loved it, Ramesh

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  14. Beautiful Rameshji.. First attempt??? Wow Superb RS. Loved it so much..

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    1. sorry for the delay in Blog-Hop because I was not feeling well yesterday.. Thanks for blessing this RS..

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  15. I guess that 'first stroke is like in poetry putting the pen to the paper and penning the first line. Or like I do, fingers on the keyboard, mind in motion, and fingers fly to make that first line.
    Keep at it, Ramesh ~~ :)
    ..
    Oh yes, I hate your word verification. I'm on my third attempt.
    I took mine off at the request of several readers.
    ..

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