Join me in practising Happiness!!! Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Awesome imagination! Beautiful haiku set with smooth flow of thoughts....
Beautiful, dream like :-)
Lovely! Especially the second one. It is powerful and stands on its own!!
A beautiful cascading haiku. I agree with Barbara the second one stands on it's own and has a strong statement
Ah, remembrance always floats. Lovely.
A sad chain, beautifully written, as usual.
What a sad story ... nicely cascading haiku.
Dreams becoming water, the paper boat floating, her tears... sad haiku, but water purifies and her dreams will emerge clean.
The lats one I find quite sad, but a good write
Brilliant haiku, but oh dear, how sad :(
dreams become water...ah!! sad....but its true at times...nicely crafted
very sad and beautiful. I wish I had thought of that.
Aw, this is a sad one. Beautiful and poignant.
I like how this flows, Ramesh!Paper Boat
Awesome imagination! Beautiful haiku set with smooth flow of thoughts....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, dream like :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely! Especially the second one. It is powerful and stands on its own!!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful cascading haiku. I agree with Barbara the second one stands on it's own and has a strong statement
ReplyDeleteAh, remembrance always floats. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteA sad chain, beautifully written, as usual.
ReplyDeleteWhat a sad story ... nicely cascading haiku.
ReplyDeleteDreams becoming water, the paper boat floating, her tears... sad haiku, but water purifies and her dreams will emerge clean.
ReplyDeleteThe lats one I find quite sad, but a good write
ReplyDeleteBrilliant haiku, but oh dear, how sad :(
ReplyDeletedreams become water...ah!! sad....but its true at times...nicely crafted
ReplyDeletevery sad and beautiful. I wish I had thought of that.
ReplyDeleteAw, this is a sad one. Beautiful and poignant.
ReplyDeleteI like how this flows, Ramesh!
ReplyDeletePaper Boat