Practising Happiness!!! Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku & Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow...and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW..
Awesome imagination! Beautiful haiku set with smooth flow of thoughts....
Beautiful, dream like :-)
Lovely! Especially the second one. It is powerful and stands on its own!!
A beautiful cascading haiku. I agree with Barbara the second one stands on it's own and has a strong statement
Ah, remembrance always floats. Lovely.
A sad chain, beautifully written, as usual.
What a sad story ... nicely cascading haiku.
Dreams becoming water, the paper boat floating, her tears... sad haiku, but water purifies and her dreams will emerge clean.
The lats one I find quite sad, but a good write
Brilliant haiku, but oh dear, how sad :(
dreams become water...ah!! sad....but its true at times...nicely crafted
very sad and beautiful. I wish I had thought of that.
Aw, this is a sad one. Beautiful and poignant.
I like how this flows, Ramesh!Paper Boat