Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Dreams Become Water...


September 26 Paper Boat

Dreams Become Water...


Streams flow from her eyes;
oh, she floats a  paper boat
loaded with her dreams

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Loaded with her dreams
the paper boat sinks slowly;
dreams become water


 
RS:)

14 comments:

  1. Awesome imagination! Beautiful haiku set with smooth flow of thoughts....

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  2. Lovely! Especially the second one. It is powerful and stands on its own!!

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  3. A beautiful cascading haiku. I agree with Barbara the second one stands on it's own and has a strong statement

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  4. A sad chain, beautifully written, as usual.

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  5. What a sad story ... nicely cascading haiku.

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  6. Dreams becoming water, the paper boat floating, her tears... sad haiku, but water purifies and her dreams will emerge clean.

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  7. The lats one I find quite sad, but a good write

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  8. Brilliant haiku, but oh dear, how sad :(

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  9. dreams become water...ah!! sad....but its true at times...nicely crafted

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  10. very sad and beautiful. I wish I had thought of that.

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  11. Aw, this is a sad one. Beautiful and poignant.

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