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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
I loved the repetition ... so powerful !!!
I like floating in empty space ~ Nice one RS ~
great poem ... the repetition is good,but I would have liked it to end 'a twist'
Your poems always remind me of waves of the ocean :)
Ramesh--these haiku have a hypnotic, dreaming quality to them. Gorgeous, too.
Floating in empty space ... great line. I love this way of writing haiku ... looks familiar Naisaiku?
Lovely! Sounds like a lullaby to me, especially 'blooms of fragrant dreams."
I ,too, like "floating in empty space" Lovely,,,
I sense waiting in this work. And I can feel it. Beautiful.
The reversal and repitition work so well, Ramesh. I like this very much.
Wish she closes her eyes and smell those fragrant dreams....Lovely haiku....Loved the reversal repetition....sounds heavenly
You are so creative not only with the word pictures but with the form itself! Pure imaginative creativity.
It gives a wonderful feel after reading it..well crafted
the repetition has weaved more magic into the already magical words... lovely read!
Floating in empty space---> wow!!!! Building Lego Dreams!
Which is first, the gift or the gifted? Lovely.
Such a lovely haiku Sir. I love the way you compose.~Sayantini Bhattacharyahttp://sayantini-bhattacharya.blogspot.in/2012/09/s-l-e-e-p.html
The words of the first one reflected in the second one..., a river in between... lovely, Ramesh.
You could sing this!Sleep Behind Barred Windows
Hi Ramesh,Even though there is repetition, it is very unique how each one has a special and distinct meaning. The segments are very different and express yin & yang to me. beautiful!:-) Nimu Shenoy