Written for Haiku Heights
September 28, 2012 Prompt: Waltz
She Waltzes Through Life..
Shadow lengthens not;
yes, walking on a tight rope
she waltzes through life
She waltzes through life;
sun, moon, stars, trees and flowers
fail to catch her rhythm
Fail to catch her rhythm;
a wife and a mother too,
she waltzes through life..
RS:)
Waltzing through life ... such a beautiful statement !!!
ReplyDeleteLove this. Amazing how she makes it look easy, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteWaltzing through life as green speck already said. Gorgeous cascading haiku ... you're the master of cascade.
ReplyDeleteSo nice. I like how you gave her a different rhythm. very very descriptive
ReplyDeleteNice Ramesh:)
ReplyDeleteA happy thought.
ReplyDeleteLovely set! I like the waltzing through life.
ReplyDeleteI, too, like the idea of "waltzing through life" So uplifting a thought to have.
ReplyDeletemy first thought of crafting the haiku was around the same idea "waltzing through life "...I dropped it and now as I went through your set I am happy that I took the right decision...because it couldn't have been better than this...lovely!!
ReplyDeleteShe is a wife...she is a mother...oh...she is so essential for our survival.....very nice !
ReplyDeleteSir... you touched all aspects of women's life...in such a nice manner....
ReplyDeleteLoved it..:)
beautiful work with the trademark repetition I've come to expect from you. I still don't get how you seem to make it work effortlessly every time!
ReplyDeleteI wish I had just such an approach to life as this!
Waltzing through life, we all wish to do. Very nice
ReplyDeleteA beautiful idea ~ she waltzes through life!
ReplyDeleteThe repetition of the line "She waltzes through life" stitches the whole piece together quite nicely.
ReplyDeleteWilderness Waltz