Thursday, September 27, 2012

She Waltzes Through Life..



Written for Haiku Heights
September 28, 2012 Prompt: Waltz


She Waltzes Through Life..


Shadow lengthens not;
yes, walking on a tight rope
she waltzes through life

She waltzes through life;
sun, moon, stars, trees and flowers
fail to catch her rhythm


Fail to catch her rhythm;
 a wife and a mother too,
she waltzes through life..


RS:)

16 comments:

  1. Waltzing through life ... such a beautiful statement !!!

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  2. Love this. Amazing how she makes it look easy, isn't it?

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  3. Waltzing through life as green speck already said. Gorgeous cascading haiku ... you're the master of cascade.

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  4. So nice. I like how you gave her a different rhythm. very very descriptive

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  5. Lovely set! I like the waltzing through life.

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  6. I, too, like the idea of "waltzing through life" So uplifting a thought to have.

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  7. my first thought of crafting the haiku was around the same idea "waltzing through life "...I dropped it and now as I went through your set I am happy that I took the right decision...because it couldn't have been better than this...lovely!!

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  8. She is a wife...she is a mother...oh...she is so essential for our survival.....very nice !

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  9. Sir... you touched all aspects of women's life...in such a nice manner....
    Loved it..:)

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  10. beautiful work with the trademark repetition I've come to expect from you. I still don't get how you seem to make it work effortlessly every time!

    I wish I had just such an approach to life as this!

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  11. Waltzing through life, we all wish to do. Very nice

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  12. A beautiful idea ~ she waltzes through life!

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  13. The repetition of the line "She waltzes through life" stitches the whole piece together quite nicely.

    Wilderness Waltz

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