Saturday, September 8, 2012

He Sings in Her Dreams


September 09, 2012 Prompt: Gloss

He Sings in Her Dreams

A glossy layer
covers his faded soul well;
ah, she fails to catch…

Ah, she fails to catch;
 he just keeps glossing over
life’s golden moments

life’s golden moments;
she picks them all to hide in
a glossy wrapping

A glossy wrapping
keeps her gleaming hopes alive;
he sings in her dreams

RS:)
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16 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 8, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    Loved so many different takes for gloss !!!

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  2. BarbaraSeptember 8, 2012 at 12:02 PM

    These are all wonderful but I really love the first one!

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  3. UnknownSeptember 8, 2012 at 12:05 PM

    These are all so dreamy and thought provoking. I love how he keeps glossing over life's golden moments.

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  4. Susan DanielsSeptember 8, 2012 at 12:44 PM

    all fantastic--#1 is my fav.

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  5. PranitaSeptember 8, 2012 at 1:05 PM

    Only you could have used a word over and again, and make it feel fresh!!!

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  6. GraceSeptember 8, 2012 at 2:57 PM

    I like the glossing wrapping..nice cascading write RS ~

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  7. ElleceeSeptember 8, 2012 at 3:25 PM

    These are lovely, Ramesh, I particularly like the third one.

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  8. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 8, 2012 at 3:27 PM

    Very very nice. The only thing I would change is

    A faded layer
    Covers his glossy soul well

    I don't think that SOULS are ever faded!

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    1. Ramesh SoodSeptember 8, 2012 at 9:40 PM

      Thanks Judy, that's a good observation.. but I have always felt that any act of deceit or a lie...takes some colour of soul away...it is in that context...To give wings to the thoughts which came out of my belief I wrote an article Souls Journey Back Home.. second post from when I started the Blog..in November 2009...I invite yout to read..if you haven't already...you can reach there from the index..

      What you say is also right...but in India it is often said that we should not let our souls get soiled..

      RS:)

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    I love to join in ... what a wonderful (cascading) dream. Loved reading this one. So many differences in gloss.

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  10. DulcinaSeptember 8, 2012 at 6:39 PM

    You have created a beautiful glossy lace made of soft touches.
    If you take one out, the magic fades.
    :)

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  11. PattiKenSeptember 8, 2012 at 8:08 PM

    Lovely. It sounds to me like your heroine is pretty much lost in self-delusion, though. Women are good at that when in love. :-)

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 8, 2012 at 10:57 PM

    Glossing over golden moments is such a sad thought...

    Gloss

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  13. Sanjana September 9, 2012 at 4:06 AM

    lot of sadness in places over there..its great to be reading into such depths of human emotions :)

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  14. TeresaSeptember 10, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    So sad to think of life's golden moments being glossed over.

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  15. Karin WibergSeptember 10, 2012 at 11:06 AM

    Nice - I like the variations.

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