Monday, September 3, 2012

Mom Is With Angels...


September 04, 2012   Prompt: Moon

Mom Is With Angels...


"Angels live up there ",
mom's words still become alive 
when I look at Moon

I look at Moon, now 
on its other side somewhere
mom is with angels...

Holding a moonbeam
she glides down to meet me;
dreams hold her quietly...


RS:) 
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27 comments:

  1. NAWALSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:39 AM

    Mom!!!
    brought me to tears!
    very touching beautifully composed RS sir!

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  2. Susan DanielsSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:53 AM

    Ramesh--this is gorgeous, and made me misty-eyed.

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  3. Sasha A. PalmerSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:57 AM

    Beautiful haiku, I was particularly moved by the last one, stunning imagery.

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  4. Amrit SinhaSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    This one was too touching and beautiful .... well written !!!

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  5. BarbaraSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    I just love "dreams hold her quietly" very beautiful.

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:53 PM

    Nicely written ... love the way you have intwined the love for your mom with the love for the moon.

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    how peaceful and loving RS

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 2:04 PM

    Really liking the sentiment written into this one

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  9. ElleceeSeptember 3, 2012 at 3:37 PM

    This is so beautiful,,,it made me think of my own Mum as if "she glides down to meet me;"

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  10. surinder nathSeptember 3, 2012 at 5:46 PM

    Surreal and yet so real,on the moon and yet full of home-truths !!!

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  11. surinder nathSeptember 3, 2012 at 5:47 PM

    Surreal and yet so real,on the moon and yet full of home-truths !!!

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  12. PattiKenSeptember 3, 2012 at 6:14 PM

    Awww... This is so warm and lovely. I like it aa lot.

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  13. PratibhaSeptember 3, 2012 at 8:29 PM

    touching .. as always you evoke beautiful feelings with words !

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  14. LocomenteSeptember 3, 2012 at 9:38 PM

    Indeed... moon has been the basis of stories that mothers say... Missing those days...

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  15. vivinfranceSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:32 PM

    A touching set. Did you mean "angles" in the first line?

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    1. Ramesh SoodSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:57 PM

      Thanks Viv..you caught it..I have corrected..

      RS:)

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  16. A Hopeless RomanticSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:10 PM

    Very Touching.
    Beautifully crafted.

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  17. Sri ValliSeptember 4, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    Very touching story weaved here!!...Very beautiful...

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  18. Mariya KolevaSeptember 4, 2012 at 3:58 AM

    It's Dad for me, but your haiku speak to me so well and clear! I love especially "dreams hold her quietly"...

    Best, MK

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  19. Reading PleasureSeptember 4, 2012 at 6:06 AM

    Ow, very touching and sweet

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  20. SusanSeptember 4, 2012 at 6:15 AM

    How lovely. Always there, the moonbeam touch will always return. What a gift from mother to child!

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  21. Vinay Leo R.September 4, 2012 at 7:22 AM

    Ah, a heavy hearted haiku, RSji. Touching.

    With the prompt being moon, I was here expecting something brilliant, since moon and stars are two of your favorite theme :) This was.

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    1. Ramesh SoodSeptember 4, 2012 at 8:21 AM

      Thanks for gifting Haiku Heights to the world..Leo...my salute to you ..and SiS..how inspiring you are!!!!

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    2. Someone is SpecialSeptember 4, 2012 at 3:12 PM

      Rameshji :) :) :) Someone is Special

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  22. TeresaSeptember 4, 2012 at 8:35 AM

    What a beautiful series of haiku. The last is certainly tugging at my heart.

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  23. UnknownSeptember 4, 2012 at 8:55 AM

    Beautiful and touching haiku. One of the best i hav ever read :-)

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  24. Someone is SpecialSeptember 4, 2012 at 3:13 PM

    My Maa is an Angel! and your Maa is with Angels! Loved your haiku Rameshji :)

    Someone is Special

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