Monday, September 3, 2012

Mom Is With Angels...


September 04, 2012   Prompt: Moon

Mom Is With Angels...


"Angels live up there ",
mom's words still become alive 
when I look at Moon

I look at Moon, now 
on its other side somewhere
mom is with angels...

Holding a moonbeam
she glides down to meet me;
dreams hold her quietly...


RS:) 

27 comments:

  1. Mom!!!
    brought me to tears!
    very touching beautifully composed RS sir!

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  2. Ramesh--this is gorgeous, and made me misty-eyed.

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  3. Beautiful haiku, I was particularly moved by the last one, stunning imagery.

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  4. This one was too touching and beautiful .... well written !!!

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  5. I just love "dreams hold her quietly" very beautiful.

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  6. Nicely written ... love the way you have intwined the love for your mom with the love for the moon.

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  7. Really liking the sentiment written into this one

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  8. This is so beautiful,,,it made me think of my own Mum as if "she glides down to meet me;"

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  9. Surreal and yet so real,on the moon and yet full of home-truths !!!

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  10. Surreal and yet so real,on the moon and yet full of home-truths !!!

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  11. Awww... This is so warm and lovely. I like it aa lot.

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  12. touching .. as always you evoke beautiful feelings with words !

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  13. Indeed... moon has been the basis of stories that mothers say... Missing those days...

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  14. A touching set. Did you mean "angles" in the first line?

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    1. Thanks Viv..you caught it..I have corrected..

      RS:)

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  15. Very touching story weaved here!!...Very beautiful...

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  16. It's Dad for me, but your haiku speak to me so well and clear! I love especially "dreams hold her quietly"...

    Best, MK

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  17. How lovely. Always there, the moonbeam touch will always return. What a gift from mother to child!

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  18. Ah, a heavy hearted haiku, RSji. Touching.

    With the prompt being moon, I was here expecting something brilliant, since moon and stars are two of your favorite theme :) This was.

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    1. Thanks for gifting Haiku Heights to the world..Leo...my salute to you ..and SiS..how inspiring you are!!!!

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    2. Rameshji :) :) :) Someone is Special

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  19. What a beautiful series of haiku. The last is certainly tugging at my heart.

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  20. Beautiful and touching haiku. One of the best i hav ever read :-)

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  21. My Maa is an Angel! and your Maa is with Angels! Loved your haiku Rameshji :)

    Someone is Special

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