Sunday, September 30, 2012

It Grew Newer Wings..



Written for

Prompt: Absent


It Grew Newer Wings..


Absent-minded I;
had left my spirit there where
it was trampled with..

It was trampled with;
Thank God it grew newer wings
to return to me..

To return to me
happier and glowing purer;
what else I need

What else I need;
attracting happier spirits
like yours gives me joy..


RS:)



16 comments:

  1. The repetitive pattern works well here, returning with joy.

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  2. Happy spirits always the best. Nice one.

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  3. I love the soaring with the wings concept. Beautifully rendered !!!

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  4. enjoyed the rthymn that your repitition produced

    much love

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  5. I like the lines
    "left my spirit there where
    it was trampled with.."
    Sometimes I feel that way too. Thank goodness your newer wings were returned to you. Lovely write.

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  6. How inspiring to grow new wings. So lovely Ramesh.

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  7. Sir, by reading this, I also wish to have new wings...thank you sir, for sharing such inspiring lines :)

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  8. Very Inspiring.....

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  9. I personally like the theme of "finding youself again." I can relate to it very well. :-) Nimu

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  10. I love the way you have penned these lines with the repetition in each stanza...lovely words filled with positivity

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  11. All spirits are happy - YOURS too! Sounds like it just had a "down" day. Great Haiku and I sooooooooooo admire you for continuing to follow your inner voice.

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  12. just lovely...wonderful progression-growth built right into your poem!

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  13. RS: GOOD EVENING

    NICE POEM,
    WORDS SPRINGING OUT FROM HEART
    AND SOARING TO REACH NEW HEIGHTS

    I REMEMBER FEW WORDS TO SHARE

    ONLY BUTTERFLY KNOWS THE PAIN OF GROWING WINGS AND
    HAPPINESS TO FLAP WINGS AND HOP ON FLOWERS TO FLOWERS

    JSJ

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