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Prompt: Absent
It Grew Newer Wings..
Absent-minded I;
had left my spirit there where
it was trampled with..
It was trampled with;
Thank God it grew newer wings
to return to me..
To return to me
happier and glowing purer;
what else I need
What else I need;
attracting happier spirits
like yours gives me joy..
RS:)
The repetitive pattern works well here, returning with joy.
ReplyDeleteHappy spirits always the best. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteI love the soaring with the wings concept. Beautifully rendered !!!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the rthymn that your repitition produced
ReplyDeletemuch love
positive...beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI like the lines
ReplyDelete"left my spirit there where
it was trampled with.."
Sometimes I feel that way too. Thank goodness your newer wings were returned to you. Lovely write.
Lovely and true.
ReplyDeleteSo positive!
ReplyDeleteHow inspiring to grow new wings. So lovely Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteSir, by reading this, I also wish to have new wings...thank you sir, for sharing such inspiring lines :)
ReplyDeleteVery Inspiring.....
ReplyDeleteI personally like the theme of "finding youself again." I can relate to it very well. :-) Nimu
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have penned these lines with the repetition in each stanza...lovely words filled with positivity
ReplyDeleteAll spirits are happy - YOURS too! Sounds like it just had a "down" day. Great Haiku and I sooooooooooo admire you for continuing to follow your inner voice.
ReplyDeletejust lovely...wonderful progression-growth built right into your poem!
ReplyDeleteRS: GOOD EVENING
ReplyDeleteNICE POEM,
WORDS SPRINGING OUT FROM HEART
AND SOARING TO REACH NEW HEIGHTS
I REMEMBER FEW WORDS TO SHARE
ONLY BUTTERFLY KNOWS THE PAIN OF GROWING WINGS AND
HAPPINESS TO FLAP WINGS AND HOP ON FLOWERS TO FLOWERS
JSJ