September 29, 2012 Prompt: Battlefield
Her Heart A Battlefield..
Work and life;
battle between her
mind and soul
mind and soul;
mind and soul;
Everyday battles rage
in her heart
Her heart;
Her heart;
a bleeding
battlefield
Battlefield;
Battlefield;
shine and glow and smile
tiny footprints
Tiny footprints;
Tiny footprints;
no more battles , no
battlefield
No Battlefield;
No Battlefield;
little hearts now dwell in
her happy heart..
RS:)
It was a battle of my nerves..have I succeeded in saying
what I want to...do let me know...your love encourages.
...'little hearts now dwell in her happy heart' ~ so inspiring ~ lovely set of haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteAh, yes, the birth of someone who matters more than we do creates truce.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Beautiful lines here ... loved them !!!
ReplyDeleteAH...love the tiny footprints!!
ReplyDeleteA good ending to these haiku. Tiny footprints, each holding a tiny heart, now dwell where pain had been. These tell quite a story and can be a life experience for so many episodes. Very well done.
ReplyDeletePeace
I am moved by this cascsding haiku. Nice take on battlefield in just a different way. Thank you Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteI love the last which sums up her battle so well. This is a lovely haiku about the power of love.
ReplyDeleteI like the sixth - a lovely, comforting conclusion.
ReplyDeleteWow, nicely done the way you link every verse to the next..
ReplyDeletea beautiful resolution,
ReplyDeletea comfort and path for peace.
well done!
so loving and inspiring.
ReplyDeleteOh that is lovely x She is fulfilled x
ReplyDeleteI love the flow of this one, and I particularly enjoyed the happy ending.
ReplyDeleteBattlefields are rarely pleasant places, but you have made this one seem rather inviting!
ReplyDeleteI’m late making the rounds from Haiku My Heart Friday. Apologies!
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