Wednesday, September 19, 2012

She Rolls Up Some Stars..



September 20, 2012  Prompt: Lights

She Rolls Up Some Stars..


Flashing lights;
she finds her own ‘self’
outside her


Outside her
a glittering world;
dark inside


Dark inside,
stars shine in her eyes;
mind lights up


Mind lights up;
she rolls up some stars,
inside shines…


Inside shines;
with a life time gone,
she is there..


RS:)

19 comments:

  1. Nicely done ...how dark it is ... there always will be light again.

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  2. A lovely contrast of light and dark !!!

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  3. This set is BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved it.. Such a variation of feelings inside her head..! I wish a lot of light for her... :)

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  4. I second Green Speck, great contrast!

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  5. I like the hopefulness in this set!

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  6. A kaleidoscope of her feelings. A circle we all travel at times I think. I like it.

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  7. Lovely cascades Ramesh! Light and darkness in unison!

    Hank

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  8. Nice journey from darkness to light inside and outside. No shadows in your clear haiku.
    :)

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  9. This is wonderful. I really like the final piece.

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  10. This is a beautiful chain - the idea of the mind lighting up is wonderful.

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  11. Deep meaning...
    And very true..
    Loved it!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/lights-on.html

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  12. light and darkness go hand in hand ...two sides of the same coin..nice cascading.. :)

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  13. Love these, Ramesh. Beautiful chain.

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  14. stars blink naughtily,

    love the playfulness in your work.

    invite you to join poets rally today.

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  15. oh i love the idea of rolling up some stars!
    i hope your day is full of warmth and your night stunning with starlight!

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