Friday, September 7, 2012

Render Me Useless..


September 08  Prompt :  Render


Render me useless
for, I am not nurturing plants;
entangled in roots…


 
RS:)
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18 comments:

  1. PranitaSeptember 7, 2012 at 12:12 PM

    Wow!!! I think this is one of your best Ramesh ji.. lovvvved this.. there's melancholy.. but there's beauty in the way you have expressed it!


    Mystery monk renders golden thanks!

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  2. Amrit SinhaSeptember 7, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    The words you have used express themselves so well ... amazing !!!

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2012 at 12:38 PM

    Not sure that's useless, but I confess my poor plants are feeling neglected right now.

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  4. BarbaraSeptember 7, 2012 at 1:23 PM

    Entangled in roots....could be a good thing. I like the ambiguity of this. Well done.

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  5. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 7, 2012 at 1:27 PM

    Wonderful. When anyone is so strongly rooted in their own soil no need to expend our precious selves helping them entangle even more. Loved this a lot.

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  6. ElleceeSeptember 7, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    I love this haiku, Ramesh. How often, I too, feel "entangled in roots". So well done.

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  7. PattiKenSeptember 7, 2012 at 3:11 PM

    Really good, Ramesh. It speaks of a universal truth, I think. We all get s caught up in our own stuff, we fail to help others as much as we coulcd

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  8. joanneSeptember 7, 2012 at 6:17 PM

    definitely sense a deeper meaning here....very poignant...

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  9. Reading PleasureSeptember 7, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    This a brilliant and apt take on the prompt

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 7, 2012 at 8:25 PM

    If I rendered you useless...oh, let's not go there!

    Haiku for Your Heart

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 7, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    Caught up in our all days the same routine ... time to brake through and force this circle ... very nice spiritual haiku Ramesh.

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  12. LeaSeptember 7, 2012 at 9:36 PM

    This is so well said. I just wrestled with letting go of such an entanglement...

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  13. LocomenteSeptember 8, 2012 at 2:58 AM

    I loved that element of dilamma...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/beloved-parents.html

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  14. odyzzSeptember 8, 2012 at 6:04 AM

    how well crafted ... nice haiku

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  15. Tarun MazumdarSeptember 8, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    It took me a few minutes to understand, but yes a lovely and deep thought in those three lines.

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/render-haiku.html

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  16. SimranSeptember 8, 2012 at 9:06 AM

    deep and very well crafted :)

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  17. Vinay Leo R.September 8, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    Can't grow if your roots are troublesome.. Need to be okay first, right RSji? :)

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  18. MarkSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    Some things are worth being entangled in--haiku, for instance--but other things are not...


    Render

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