Friday, September 7, 2012

Render Me Useless..


September 08  Prompt :  Render


Render me useless
for, I am not nurturing plants;
entangled in roots…


 
RS:)

18 comments:

  1. Wow!!! I think this is one of your best Ramesh ji.. lovvvved this.. there's melancholy.. but there's beauty in the way you have expressed it!


    Mystery monk renders golden thanks!

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  2. The words you have used express themselves so well ... amazing !!!

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  3. Not sure that's useless, but I confess my poor plants are feeling neglected right now.

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  4. Entangled in roots....could be a good thing. I like the ambiguity of this. Well done.

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  5. Wonderful. When anyone is so strongly rooted in their own soil no need to expend our precious selves helping them entangle even more. Loved this a lot.

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  6. I love this haiku, Ramesh. How often, I too, feel "entangled in roots". So well done.

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  7. Really good, Ramesh. It speaks of a universal truth, I think. We all get s caught up in our own stuff, we fail to help others as much as we coulcd

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  8. definitely sense a deeper meaning here....very poignant...

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  9. This a brilliant and apt take on the prompt

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  10. Caught up in our all days the same routine ... time to brake through and force this circle ... very nice spiritual haiku Ramesh.

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  11. This is so well said. I just wrestled with letting go of such an entanglement...

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  12. I loved that element of dilamma...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/beloved-parents.html

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  13. how well crafted ... nice haiku

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  14. It took me a few minutes to understand, but yes a lovely and deep thought in those three lines.

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/render-haiku.html

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  15. Can't grow if your roots are troublesome.. Need to be okay first, right RSji? :)

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  16. Some things are worth being entangled in--haiku, for instance--but other things are not...


    Render

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