Wednesday, September 5, 2012

My Milky Way, That!!!





September 06  Prompt: Milky Way
Thanks to Chevrefeuille  (KP)
Hope I meet your expectations, KP..

My Milky Way, That!!!


Drops of water in
billions shine in her wet hair;
my milky way, that!

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My milky way that;
just one jerk and the stars fly
to shine on my face…


RS:)
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28 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 5, 2012 at 11:38 AM

    You make the words flow like a movie ... amazing !!!

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  2. PattiKenSeptember 5, 2012 at 11:50 AM

    Very interesting take on the prompt. As we progress through the daily prompts, I find I'm liking the haiku that make me work a bit for it. This does that.

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  3. GraceSeptember 5, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    A lovely take RS ~

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  4. ElleceeSeptember 5, 2012 at 12:23 PM

    What a lovely romantic version of the milky way. I can see your picture clearly.

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  5. SusanSeptember 5, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    Oh. I imagine it perfectly, but do not know whether to put a cat, a dog, or a romantic person in the picture. What fun!

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2012 at 12:35 PM

    creative!

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  7. UnknownSeptember 5, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    How romantic, and so unique. Truly wonderful haiku!

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  8. BarbaraSeptember 5, 2012 at 1:18 PM

    Very imaginative!! Very nice set!!

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 5, 2012 at 5:07 PM

    You have reach my expectations Ramesh, you did even better than myself. I love the second verse ... 'stars fly to shine on my face' ... really you did a good job.

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  10. UnknownSeptember 5, 2012 at 9:43 PM

    Billions of nice milky way...thankyou Sir, for sharing the light of the milky way

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  11. Kirti ShakunSeptember 5, 2012 at 10:13 PM

    The moment I read...I can imagine all that you wrap so beautifully in those words....Very Nice Sir!!!

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  12. LocomenteSeptember 6, 2012 at 1:35 AM

    Oh...
    Lovely!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/milky-way.html

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  13. Reading PleasureSeptember 6, 2012 at 3:19 AM

    I am in love with the first one. Very beautiful

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  14. UnknownSeptember 6, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    well composed indeed!

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  15. Karin WibergSeptember 6, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    Nice. Very clever! Especially like the first one.

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  16. Tarun MazumdarSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:21 AM

    smart attempt.. I like the image of droplets..

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/milky-way-haiku.html

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2012 at 9:02 AM

    Very nice take on the prompt liking the second one

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  18. Vinay Leo R.September 6, 2012 at 9:23 AM

    Very interesting and different take :)

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  19. Rachana ShakyawarSeptember 6, 2012 at 11:16 AM

    Oh!!! WOnderful.. sure can relate it!!!! :))

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  20. TeresaSeptember 6, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    "the stars fly to shine of my face" Lovely.

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  21. LeaSeptember 7, 2012 at 12:06 PM

    Just beautiful!

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  22. Jennifer WagnerSeptember 7, 2012 at 12:58 PM

    Sweetly written. Very creative take on the prompt.

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  23. Someone is SpecialSeptember 7, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    That's too romantic Rameshji :)

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  24. FallingladiesSeptember 7, 2012 at 4:51 PM

    Very romantic! Wow!

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  25. gmaSeptember 7, 2012 at 7:26 PM

    I like it. Water stars....just for you!

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  26. carol l mckennaSeptember 8, 2012 at 6:54 AM

    lilting words ~ soft as a milky way shining ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  27. rebeccaSeptember 8, 2012 at 11:16 AM

    lovely as always my dear friend ramesh!

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  28. MaritSeptember 9, 2012 at 3:49 AM

    Beautiful words again - It pictures raindrops like diamonds in her hair.

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