Wednesday, September 5, 2012

My Milky Way, That!!!





September 06  Prompt: Milky Way
Thanks to Chevrefeuille  (KP)
Hope I meet your expectations, KP..

My Milky Way, That!!!


Drops of water in
billions shine in her wet hair;
my milky way, that!

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My milky way that;
just one jerk and the stars fly
to shine on my face…


RS:)

29 comments:

  1. You make the words flow like a movie ... amazing !!!

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  2. Very interesting take on the prompt. As we progress through the daily prompts, I find I'm liking the haiku that make me work a bit for it. This does that.

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  3. What a lovely romantic version of the milky way. I can see your picture clearly.

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  4. Oh. I imagine it perfectly, but do not know whether to put a cat, a dog, or a romantic person in the picture. What fun!

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  5. How romantic, and so unique. Truly wonderful haiku!

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  6. Very imaginative!! Very nice set!!

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  7. You have reach my expectations Ramesh, you did even better than myself. I love the second verse ... 'stars fly to shine on my face' ... really you did a good job.

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  8. Billions of nice milky way...thankyou Sir, for sharing the light of the milky way

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  9. The moment I read...I can imagine all that you wrap so beautifully in those words....Very Nice Sir!!!

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  10. Oh...
    Lovely!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/milky-way.html

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  11. I am in love with the first one. Very beautiful

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  12. Nice. Very clever! Especially like the first one.

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  13. smart attempt.. I like the image of droplets..

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/milky-way-haiku.html

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  14. Very nice take on the prompt liking the second one

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  15. Very interesting and different take :)

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  16. Oh!!! WOnderful.. sure can relate it!!!! :))

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  17. "the stars fly to shine of my face" Lovely.

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  18. Sweetly written. Very creative take on the prompt.

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  19. I like it. Water stars....just for you!

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  20. lilting words ~ soft as a milky way shining ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  21. lovely as always my dear friend ramesh!

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  22. Beautiful words again - It pictures raindrops like diamonds in her hair.

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