September 05 Prompt: Autumn
Autumn Sheds Inhibitions
love blooms all around
autumn sheds inhibitions;
a moonlit clear sky
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a moonlit clear sky;
ah, autumn's winds whisper
stories of her love
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Stories of her love;
she waits for the rains to go,
to smell autumn fresh..
RS:)
Ramesh, all three are beautiful, and fit so well together. Loving these.
ReplyDeleteLove the line about autumn shedding inhibitions...very nice
ReplyDeleteI loved the 2nd stanza ... autumn winds whispering her love story ... great imagination here :-)
ReplyDeleteAs usual... beautiful n dreamy! :)
ReplyDeleteLike the cascading haiku ~ Beautiful ~
ReplyDeleteRameshji... Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Love this cascading haiku. Especially the line "autumn sheds inhibitions;"
ReplyDeleteLovely to read you again, Ramesh. I enjoy all three.
ReplyDeletemm. Nice to think of Love all around, as if the harvest came out from undercover. And then, O, autumn can be smelled fresh. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteA story within...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
I hear Hope!
ReplyDeleteand touch of Love to it,Lovely.
Lovely - your Autumn must be so different from ours.
ReplyDeleteIt's another Ramesh cascading haiku ... wonderfully done. Love the way you have painted Autumn. Full of hope.
ReplyDeleteRamesh, these are beautifully crafted. Well done
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful way to combine moon and autumn, RSji.. :)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful thoughts....Lovely set!.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteAh.... sir.. hats off... too good... the set comes with a feel good factor..
ReplyDeletehttp://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-haiku.html
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ReplyDeleteI'm loving the repetition as you read down through them
ReplyDeleteVery creative!
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