Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Autumn Sheds Inhibitions..



September 05    Prompt: Autumn

Autumn  Sheds Inhibitions


love blooms all around
autumn sheds inhibitions;
a moonlit clear sky

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a moonlit clear sky;
ah, autumn's winds whisper 
stories of her love

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Stories of her love;
she waits for the rains to go,  
to smell autumn fresh..


RS:)

21 comments:

  1. Ramesh, all three are beautiful, and fit so well together. Loving these.

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  2. Love the line about autumn shedding inhibitions...very nice

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  3. I loved the 2nd stanza ... autumn winds whispering her love story ... great imagination here :-)

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  4. As usual... beautiful n dreamy! :)

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  5. Like the cascading haiku ~ Beautiful ~

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  6. Rameshji... Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Someone is Special

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  7. Love this cascading haiku. Especially the line "autumn sheds inhibitions;"

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  8. Lovely to read you again, Ramesh. I enjoy all three.

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  9. mm. Nice to think of Love all around, as if the harvest came out from undercover. And then, O, autumn can be smelled fresh. Lovely.

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  10. I hear Hope!
    and touch of Love to it,Lovely.

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  11. Lovely - your Autumn must be so different from ours.

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  12. It's another Ramesh cascading haiku ... wonderfully done. Love the way you have painted Autumn. Full of hope.

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  13. Ramesh, these are beautifully crafted. Well done

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  14. What a beautiful way to combine moon and autumn, RSji.. :)

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  15. Very beautiful thoughts....Lovely set!.

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  16. Ah.... sir.. hats off... too good... the set comes with a feel good factor..

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-haiku.html

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  17. I'm loving the repetition as you read down through them

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