Thursday, September 6, 2012

She Wipes All His Tears...


September 07  Prompt: Agile


So agile!
she wipes all his tears
in a flash

In a flash
her eyes start smiling;
so agile!

So agile;
he falls back again
in her eyes...


RS:)
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2012 at 12:02 PM

    An interesting take on the prompt. I would not ordinarily think of eyes and smiles with agile. Nicely done.

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  2. BarbaraSeptember 6, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    I love your take on this prompt...very original.

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 6, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    Wonderful cascade Ramesh. I love the way you've used agile, but I find this prompt difficult to understand.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2012 at 1:11 PM

    great repetition of agile doffing my hat to it

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  5. ElleceeSeptember 6, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    Very romantic those eyes,,,I enjoyed your haiku today.

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  6. PattiKenSeptember 6, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    Nice. I like the progression. The agility of love is a great take on the prompt.

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  7. Kirti ShakunSeptember 6, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    Very nice.... :-)

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  8. LocomenteSeptember 6, 2012 at 10:20 PM

    Romantic...

    He falls back again in her eyes...
    Loved that line...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/agile-mind.html

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  9. vivinfranceSeptember 6, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    A love story. This prompt has brought some interesting interpretations today.

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  10. Amrit SinhaSeptember 7, 2012 at 12:50 AM

    A beautiful tale :-)

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  11. rallentandaSeptember 7, 2012 at 3:34 AM

    You have been very romantic lately!

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  12. TigerbriteSeptember 7, 2012 at 3:55 AM

    Nice :)

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  13. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 7, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    falling into eyes -- lovely image!

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  14. odyzzSeptember 7, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    A wonderful romantic take ...

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  15. Someone is SpecialSeptember 7, 2012 at 4:16 PM

    So agile
    he falls back again
    in her eyes

    :) :) Rameshji No words.. :)

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  16. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 7, 2012 at 8:41 PM

    I like how he falls into her eyes...wow!

    An Agile Threesome

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  17. Vinay Leo R.September 8, 2012 at 8:10 AM

    Like a reconciliation of sorts I think :) Nice one.

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