Thursday, September 6, 2012

She Wipes All His Tears...


September 07  Prompt: Agile


So agile!
she wipes all his tears
in a flash

In a flash
her eyes start smiling;
so agile!

So agile;
he falls back again
in her eyes...


RS:)

17 comments:

  1. An interesting take on the prompt. I would not ordinarily think of eyes and smiles with agile. Nicely done.

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  2. I love your take on this prompt...very original.

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  3. Wonderful cascade Ramesh. I love the way you've used agile, but I find this prompt difficult to understand.

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  4. great repetition of agile doffing my hat to it

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  5. Very romantic those eyes,,,I enjoyed your haiku today.

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  6. Nice. I like the progression. The agility of love is a great take on the prompt.

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  7. Very nice.... :-)

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  8. Romantic...

    He falls back again in her eyes...
    Loved that line...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/agile-mind.html

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  9. A love story. This prompt has brought some interesting interpretations today.

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  10. You have been very romantic lately!

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  11. So agile
    he falls back again
    in her eyes

    :) :) Rameshji No words.. :)

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  12. Like a reconciliation of sorts I think :) Nice one.

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