September 23 Prompt: Hummingbird
Hummingbird , Her Guide..
Flapping wings of love
she balances work and life;
sweet sound of her hum
Sweet sound of her hum
keeps him cheery in his place;
Sweet sound of her hum
keeps him cheery in his place;
hummingbird , her guide
RS:)
A cheery little poem ... loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, to have a hummingbird as MY guide!
ReplyDeleteHummingbird Heaven
Sweet sound of her hum...beautiful!
ReplyDelete'Humming Bird, her guide', so well said... Remarkable!!!
ReplyDeleteIndeed there are so many thing in nature that often gives us hint, suggestion & guide us at times!!
Loved it!!
What a sweet haiku, very tender. I like "flapping wings of love" :-)
ReplyDelete"Sweet sound of her hum" - lyrical.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if you have anyone specific in mind but if you do I hope you put this on her pillow.
dancing imagery.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully composed set of haiku.
ReplyDeleteSounds like two happy hummingbirds flying through life together. :-)
ReplyDeletehummingbird , her guide
ReplyDelete..............I like much these wordings. Fine.
Very hard to do, balancing work and life.
ReplyDeleteSuch a happy image, thank you it will enrich my day.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of learning from nature! Sweet thought... :)
ReplyDeleteRamesh--this is sweetly beautiful!
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