Monday, September 10, 2012

Lies Are Set Aflame..





September 11, 2012 Prompt: Divine


Lies are set aflame;
she hides behind divine to
  escape heat and smoke..


RS:)
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19 comments:

  1. NAWALSeptember 10, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    What a wonderful escape!
    Beautifully composed!

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  2. Susan DanielsSeptember 10, 2012 at 11:52 AM

    Oh, I like!

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  3. Amrit SinhaSeptember 10, 2012 at 11:54 AM

    I love the story you narrate behind these words ... amazing !!!

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  4. GraceSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    That first line is divine ~

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  5. PranitaSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:09 PM

    Such a common phenomenon these days... on the increase!

    Cradling star rock in pious palms

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  6. ElleceeSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    Very intense haiku and the actions sometimes true.. We do many things " to escape heat and smoke"

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  7. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 10, 2012 at 1:56 PM

    Powerful! One of my favorites.

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  8. BarbaraSeptember 10, 2012 at 5:47 PM

    I love the tale you weave in three lines! Well done.

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  9. PattiKenSeptember 10, 2012 at 5:56 PM

    Very good. This is very apropos for some of the activities in the US right now.

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  10. C.S.HSeptember 10, 2012 at 8:52 PM

    Deception, lies, secrecy.. You'd be surprised how many hide behind the divine to cover up their secrets as though you could ever really hide from God. Very interesting post indeed! Excellent haiku!

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  11. DulcinaSeptember 10, 2012 at 11:16 PM

    So much hidden in your haiku; so much blowing with the smoke.
    My hubby said that woman was me, hehehe.
    :)

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  12. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 11, 2012 at 12:42 AM

    This is stunning Ramesh ... very well written. Brought memories to me of the WTC attacks. I don't think that's what you mean in this one, but ... well ... it's just my feeling.

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  13. Reading PleasureSeptember 11, 2012 at 4:20 AM

    Beautiful and powerful statement!

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  14. odyzzSeptember 11, 2012 at 6:22 AM

    very impacting ...amazing!!

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  15. Maude LynnSeptember 11, 2012 at 8:54 AM

    Beautifully done!

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  16. TeresaSeptember 11, 2012 at 9:45 AM

    This is great!

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  17. Vinay Leo R.September 11, 2012 at 12:05 PM

    RS, I see this but one way, an honor killing..

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  18. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 11, 2012 at 4:26 PM

    Whoa! Is that a safe hiding place?

    Divine

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  19. UnknownSeptember 11, 2012 at 8:44 PM

    very nicely rendered

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