Thursday, September 13, 2012

Rainbow Reveals Its True Self..


September 14, 2012 Prompt: Revelation

Rainbow Reveals Its True Self..


She flies through rainbow,
yet her white wings remain white;
revelation, that!

Revelation, that!
rainbow reveals its true self
to her pure spirit..


RS:)

13 comments:

  1. Wow! This is just so beautiful... both the thought and the picture it paints! Very beautiful... i add this to one of my favorites by u ! :)

    Easy wings flutter to the Sun

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  2. Very mysterious set today but I like the mystery of it!

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  3. Such a beautiful composition RSji..

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  4. Lovely take on the prompt, so mystical and mysterious. Deep thoughts and strong feelings. Greatly composed haiku. Another favorite haiku ...

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  5. Ah, flying through a rainbow with white wings... so lovely. I want to do that!

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  6. Simple and lovely my old friend.


    Melanie

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  7. Wonder if she finds a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow :)

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  8. Lovely words painting a beautiful picture for us.

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  9. Wonderful! I love that some things remain true to what they are all the time, whether revealed or not.

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  10. she is untouched....and that certainly is a revelation! a song of faith...

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  11. White wings remaining white - such a wonderful image - going in one place and coming out the other unchanged.

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