Sunday, September 2, 2012

She Plays With Her Words..




Sept.03, 2012
Haiku Heights
Prompt: Loneliness



No, loneliness
doesn't trouble her any more;
she plays with her words


She plays with her words
in the mornings, evenings;
lonely nights grow them..


RS:)


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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2012 at 12:24 PM

    Oh really liking yours 'she plays with words' great line

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  2. Amrit SinhaSeptember 2, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    "lonely nights grow them" - amazing writing !!!

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  3. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 2, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    Oh man! How can you present same thought in two contradictory senses? Amazing!

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  4. ElleceeSeptember 2, 2012 at 3:38 PM

    I love the line "lonely nights grow them" How true that is sometimes. Very special haiku.

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  5. GraceSeptember 2, 2012 at 4:41 PM

    I like the lonely nights grow them ~

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  6. vivinfranceSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:33 PM

    That last line is superb. If we have words, and someone to communicate them with, loneliness is banished.

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  7. Sri ValliSeptember 3, 2012 at 6:35 AM

    Lonely nights grow them...Very beautiful....Sometimes, loneliness is an inspiration to start new things.....Lovely thought...

    Lonely girl

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  8. UnknownSeptember 3, 2012 at 6:53 AM

    Powerfully delivered!

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 3, 2012 at 8:17 AM

    Somehow, I never think of word play as a form of loneliness...

    A Long Loneliness

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  10. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 3, 2012 at 8:49 AM

    What a wonderfully composed set Ramesh ... still writing on in all her loneliness ...

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  11. Reading PleasureSeptember 3, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    Wonderfull metaphoric play on the prompts

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  12. NAWALSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:07 AM

    WOW SEEMS LIKE SHE FOUND FRIENDSHIP WITH LONELINESS....

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  13. PattiKenSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:29 AM

    Good observation. Loneliness is often the inspiration for poets.

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  14. TeresaSeptember 4, 2012 at 7:05 AM

    Playing with words is a wonderful way to avoid loneliness!

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  15. Someone is SpecialSeptember 4, 2012 at 3:14 PM

    "lonely nights grow them" Loved it so much Rameshji!!!!

    Someone is Special

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