Sunday, September 2, 2012

She Plays With Her Words..




Sept.03, 2012
Haiku Heights
Prompt: Loneliness



No, loneliness
doesn't trouble her any more;
she plays with her words


She plays with her words
in the mornings, evenings;
lonely nights grow them..


RS:)


15 comments:

  1. Oh really liking yours 'she plays with words' great line

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  2. "lonely nights grow them" - amazing writing !!!

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  3. Oh man! How can you present same thought in two contradictory senses? Amazing!

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  4. I love the line "lonely nights grow them" How true that is sometimes. Very special haiku.

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  5. I like the lonely nights grow them ~

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  6. That last line is superb. If we have words, and someone to communicate them with, loneliness is banished.

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  7. Lonely nights grow them...Very beautiful....Sometimes, loneliness is an inspiration to start new things.....Lovely thought...

    Lonely girl

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  8. Somehow, I never think of word play as a form of loneliness...

    A Long Loneliness

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  9. What a wonderfully composed set Ramesh ... still writing on in all her loneliness ...

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  10. Wonderfull metaphoric play on the prompts

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  11. WOW SEEMS LIKE SHE FOUND FRIENDSHIP WITH LONELINESS....

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  12. Good observation. Loneliness is often the inspiration for poets.

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  13. Playing with words is a wonderful way to avoid loneliness!

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  14. "lonely nights grow them" Loved it so much Rameshji!!!!

    Someone is Special

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