Join me in practising Happiness!!!
Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
1st one was WOW... :)2nd one...you reminded me of my sweet school days...;)
Naive honeybee..how creative is this ~The second is ouch..ouch ~
I enjoyed both of your haiku. My favourite line "ah, naive honeybee" Interesting take :-)
I think that first little bee is smarter than people may think. It keeps the honey supply alive and well. The second haiku is a cute one.
Very nice... second one shows the happiness of a kid on missing school, even after being bitten and hurt by a bee! Shows how kids choose to see the happy side of a situation!
I Loved both, the second one, so simple, so sweet and so beautiful...in few words..
The second one made me smile. Really, so much depends on the perspective we choose to take. A bee may be friendly and helpful, her sting - a blessing! :-)
Awesome haiku.....haha...second one so lovely....reminded my school days....and I loved the way you said 'friendly honeybee' :D
No school, eh? Fun haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
Lovely done. Haiku set with a smile ... wonderful Ramesh.
Anything to get out of going to school, eh? :)About honeybees: “First Light”