April 09, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..
Prompt: Seashore..
Words Ride Waves..
Ah, seashore;
erect rocks laugh at
angry waves
Angry waves;
grains of sand shine in
quiet moonlight
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Quiet moonlight;
a song is born as
words ride waves
Words ride waves
soothing their anger;
harmony
Harmony
melts the arrogance;
milder rocks..
Milder rocks
and quieter waves;
mind at rest
Mind at rest;
waves reach out to me
kiss my feet
Kiss my feet
and I just lie down
ah, seashore..
RS:)
Beautiful composition!:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful... simply beautiful Rameshji.. :)
ReplyDeleteTo lie down at the seashore on a calm day soothes many a difficult thought and feelings. I enjoyed this set of haiku very much. Thank you.
ReplyDeletewhat an awesome set of Haiku...you almost took me to the seashore..."Kiss my feet and I just lie down"...beautiful line... :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice and restful weaving of lines ~
ReplyDeleteAs always... ! Hats off!
ReplyDeleteA song of the shore, beautiful.
ReplyDeletesensual haiku ~ very creative ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely, like riding along on the waves until that great last stanza.
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderfully composed series of haiku. Thank you Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteSuperb. I must try 3 5 3.
ReplyDeleteThis flowed with the waves.
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWow!....Wonderful set....I wonder how you get such beautiful thoughts!!.."erect rocks laugh at
ReplyDeleteangry waves "....Mind blowing!
Wonderful weaving cascade ... Thank you for visiting my Day 9 ~~ Stretches of Seashore.
ReplyDeleteIt took that many haiku to try to capture the vitality and multiple beauties of the seashore.
ReplyDeleteRichard