Sunday, April 8, 2012

Words Ride Waves..

April 09, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..

Prompt: Seashore..

Words Ride Waves..

Ah, seashore;
erect rocks laugh at
angry waves

Angry waves;
grains of sand shine in
quiet moonlight

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Quiet moonlight;
a song is born as
words ride waves

Words ride waves
soothing their anger;
harmony

Harmony
melts the arrogance;
milder rocks..

Milder rocks
and quieter waves;
mind at rest

Mind at rest;
waves reach out to me
kiss my feet

Kiss my feet
and I just lie down
ah, seashore..

RS:)

16 comments:

  1. beautiful... simply beautiful Rameshji.. :)

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  2. To lie down at the seashore on a calm day soothes many a difficult thought and feelings. I enjoyed this set of haiku very much. Thank you.

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  3. what an awesome set of Haiku...you almost took me to the seashore..."Kiss my feet and I just lie down"...beautiful line... :)

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  4. Very nice and restful weaving of lines ~

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  5. A song of the shore, beautiful.

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  6. sensual haiku ~ very creative ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. This is lovely, like riding along on the waves until that great last stanza.

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  8. This is a very beautiful set of haiku. Nice flow from one to the other. I like this technique! Thank you :)

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  9. Another wonderfully composed series of haiku. Thank you Ramesh.

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  10. Superb. I must try 3 5 3.
    This flowed with the waves.

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  11. Wow!....Wonderful set....I wonder how you get such beautiful thoughts!!.."erect rocks laugh at
    angry waves "....Mind blowing!

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  12. Wonderful weaving cascade ... Thank you for visiting my Day 9 ~~ Stretches of Seashore.

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  13. It took that many haiku to try to capture the vitality and multiple beauties of the seashore.

    Richard

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