Friday, April 20, 2012

Lips find Perfect Curve..



Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..



Smile, my beloved
and tears are my friends;
inseparable

***

I keep listening
to hope of empty promise;
a heavier heart

***

A heavier heart
quietly flows out of my eyes;
lips find perfect curve..



RS:)


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12 comments:

  1. anthonynorthApril 20, 2012 at 3:21 AM

    That perfect curve is good.

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  2. LibbyApril 20, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    I think the first one is my favorite. Really well done. It says a lot in so few words...

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  3. carol l mckennaApril 20, 2012 at 5:46 AM

    Like the perfect curve also ~ very creative haiku ~thanks for sharing, namaste, ^_^ ~ linked w/Haiku My Heart

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  4. rebeccaApril 20, 2012 at 6:35 AM

    thank you ramesh for your ability to write words with an inspired heart. you are a painter of boundless soul beauty.

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  5. KarenApril 20, 2012 at 7:41 AM

    Bittersweet Ramesh.

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  6. foxysueApril 20, 2012 at 8:16 AM

    May your heart lighten,
    promises become fulfilled,
    smile be a constant.

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  7. PranitaApril 20, 2012 at 9:57 AM

    The last Haiku, very heart-breaking! Very touchy this one.. Felt the joy and pain throughout! Very well done Ramesh ji :)

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  8. Sri ValliApril 20, 2012 at 10:41 AM

    Beautiful set....Very deep meanings :)

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  9. Noelle ClearwaterApril 20, 2012 at 7:05 PM

    I like the whole set as well, Ramesh and I am reminded of Kahlil Gibran's A Tear and A Smile. Lovely words and yes so very true. They are inseparable. I like your picture :)
    Namaste,
    Noelle

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  10. Fran aka RedondowriterApril 20, 2012 at 9:40 PM

    I always know I will find words here--like zen koan. Sensuous today.

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  11. Bruce MillerApril 21, 2012 at 4:21 PM

    You are a master of meaning and magical words.

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  12. Judith WesterfieldApril 21, 2012 at 10:06 PM

    The first is my favorite too. Beautifully said

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