April 24, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge
Prompt: Bliss..
Lonely;
what a bliss,
your thought
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Breathing;
what a bliss,
life is..
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Thank God;
what a bliss,
to pray..
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Breathing;
what a bliss,
life is..
***
Thank God;
what a bliss,
to pray..
RS:)
"what a bliss,
ReplyDeletelife is..", total bliss!!
So divine, and second one, really life is bliss, if we realize the importance of the gift of God, that is breathing. Praying always, purifies and gives bliss. Minimum words expressing bliss.
ReplyDeleteI like the spare Japanese feel to these. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIts so damn precise and touching set ... i m loving it ... :) thanks sir :)
ReplyDeleteSimple and subtle... but life's truth! Bliss is as beautiful as ur haiku Sir! :)
ReplyDeleteVery contemplative ~ excellent haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet...
ReplyDeleteA post full of bliss ~ Very nice set ~
ReplyDeleteThe first one is a charm...
ReplyDeleteSimple and sweet and so meaningful lines...
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful thoughts ! Life is indeed bliss :-)
ReplyDeleteI love your condensed way with a thought - the essence of haiku.
ReplyDeleteYou have said so much with such little words. Well done Ramesh.
ReplyDeletePrayer as bliss...I understand.
ReplyDeleteIs This Bliss?
Contemplative bliss ~~ Wonderful!
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