Friday, April 20, 2012

He Finds Some New Dreams!!



April 21, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge


Prompt: Serendipity


My prompted post, this!
serependitously, I
meet you, shining soul..


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He Finds Some New Dreams

An accidental
eye lock as she draws curtains;
He finds some new dreams



RS:)
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20 comments:

  1. CYNOSUREApril 20, 2012 at 12:10 PM

    2nd one was such a sweet one... :)

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 20, 2012 at 12:12 PM

      that's what I call a perfect timing...I posted my comment on ur post and at the same time got urs... :P

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  2. Tarun MazumdarApril 20, 2012 at 12:16 PM

    the second is beautiful

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  3. debuApril 20, 2012 at 12:23 PM

    beautiful

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  4. PranitaApril 20, 2012 at 1:03 PM

    Very sweet :)

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  5. GraceApril 20, 2012 at 3:27 PM

    That must be his good fortune :-)

    And isn't it fun that we all meet in cyberspace in our writing haiku? Serendipity !!!!

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  6. ElleceeApril 20, 2012 at 5:38 PM

    I enjoyed your haiku toady. Especially the second one with the last line "He finds some new dreams" It's always wonderful to find new dreams.

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  7. SandyCarlsonApril 20, 2012 at 7:03 PM

    Oh, those accidental contacts!

    (By the way, your prompt for OSI comes up Sunday. Please send me a poem tomorrow!)

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  8. PranitaApril 20, 2012 at 9:44 PM

    Very sweet Haiku... the magic of love at first sight? :)

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  9. Mariya KolevaApril 20, 2012 at 10:12 PM

    I like both! The Muse is in both :-)

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  10. vivinfranceApril 20, 2012 at 10:19 PM

    deliciously serendipitous.

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  11. Jaideep RaoApril 21, 2012 at 1:09 AM

    "shining soul". Whatta concept!, loved it :)

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  12. JinksyApril 21, 2012 at 1:25 AM

    I did like your first 'serendipitously'!

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  13. rallentandaApril 21, 2012 at 2:41 AM

    Ha this second one is great...Who is this neighbour of yours?:)

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  14. ChevrefeuilleApril 21, 2012 at 5:57 AM

    Great one Ramesh. Really good fortune

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  15. carol l mckennaApril 21, 2012 at 6:09 AM

    lovely 'soul connecting' haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  16. Sri ValliApril 21, 2012 at 9:57 AM

    Awesome haiku.....I enjoyed reading second one....Sweet :)

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  17. Mohini PuranikApril 21, 2012 at 10:33 AM

    So lovely and so sweet..

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  18. PattiKenApril 21, 2012 at 11:42 AM

    Both are nice, but I love the last one. There's a whole story there.

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  19. Judith WesterfieldApril 21, 2012 at 10:04 PM

    The second one is my favorite. You create a great image for the mind's eye to enlarge upon.

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