Friday, April 20, 2012

He Finds Some New Dreams!!



April 21, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge


Prompt: Serendipity


My prompted post, this!
serependitously, I
meet you, shining soul..


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He Finds Some New Dreams

An accidental
eye lock as she draws curtains;
He finds some new dreams



RS:)

21 comments:

  1. 2nd one was such a sweet one... :)

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    1. that's what I call a perfect timing...I posted my comment on ur post and at the same time got urs... :P

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  2. That must be his good fortune :-)

    And isn't it fun that we all meet in cyberspace in our writing haiku? Serendipity !!!!

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  3. I enjoyed your haiku toady. Especially the second one with the last line "He finds some new dreams" It's always wonderful to find new dreams.

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  4. Oh, those accidental contacts!

    (By the way, your prompt for OSI comes up Sunday. Please send me a poem tomorrow!)

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  5. Very sweet Haiku... the magic of love at first sight? :)

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  6. I like both! The Muse is in both :-)

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  7. "shining soul". Whatta concept!, loved it :)

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  8. I did like your first 'serendipitously'!

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  9. Ha this second one is great...Who is this neighbour of yours?:)

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  10. Great one Ramesh. Really good fortune

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  11. lovely 'soul connecting' haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  12. Rameshji, I am visiting you after such a long time, and your haiku brought a smile on my face. The second one conjured up a scene from the movie - Dil Toh Pagal Hai - Maya draws the curtains on the moon-lit night, and hears that signature tune????
    :)
    A bit too much na.. he he
    TC
    Regards
    Punam

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  13. Awesome haiku.....I enjoyed reading second one....Sweet :)

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  14. Both are nice, but I love the last one. There's a whole story there.

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  15. The second one is my favorite. You create a great image for the mind's eye to enlarge upon.

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