April 6, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..
Prompt : HOPE
No Signs Or Footprints...
Hope presents herself
carrying bundles of dreams;
no signs or footprints
No signs or footprints
ah, she was hiding behind
curtains of self-doubt
Curtains of self-doubt
get pulled by happy times;
I feel confident
I feel confident
as I take a step forward;
Sun kisses my brow
Sun kisses my brow
I let it enter my heart;
hope presents herself
RS:)
Wow... one must learn from you to write delightful haiku... totally superlative, this one!
ReplyDeleteI take a bow, Sir. really. this is a 15-line 'journey'. i have no words. inspiring. thank you so much for this. :)
ReplyDeleteI feel confident
ReplyDeleteas I take a step forward;
Sun kisses my brow ...
(My favourite part) .
brilliant and beautiful :)
I like that you have come full circle in this lovely haiku. From self-doubt to renewed hope. I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteExcellent haiku ~ well written ~ Bravo ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteHow nice when hope is fulfilled, Ramesh! Great haiku write!
ReplyDeleteHank
Very nice set...its uplifting when hope enters the heart and kisses the brow ~
ReplyDeleteVery nice ... I particularly like the beginning!
ReplyDeleteThis is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.
Beautiful,spiritual,inspirational and worth about ten reads..instead I will make a copy:)
ReplyDeleteloved the 2nd last para...awesome one sir... :)
ReplyDeleteHope presents herself
ReplyDeletecarrying bundles of dreams;
no signs or footprints
This first piece says it all for me!!!
Nicely!
Sometimes I wish hope doesn't hide too much. But so glad she presents herself just the same. Beautiful haiku!
ReplyDeleteYes, Hope. It's all there in these haiku. The hope of living. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteMore Peace
You had fun with this one, Ramesh, I can tell. It seems like a little game of hide-and-seek going on! :)
ReplyDeleteTell Me, Sister Crow
Wow!...This is my favorite haiku of yours till now :)
ReplyDelete"Curtains of self-doubt
get pulled by happy times;
I feel confident"
Beautiful lines.....Thanks for sharing :)
So deep, your Haiku are really inspiring Rameshji, this one touched me so much.
ReplyDeleteThis is so, so beautifully written. I just love the way each haiku leads to the next and the thoughts develop. This shows a lot of talent!
ReplyDeleteYou did it again Ramesh. Wonderful cascading haiku.
ReplyDeletetouching, lovely!
ReplyDelete"Bundles of dreams" and "curtains of self-doubt" are stunning images!
ReplyDeleteA lovely haiku sequence. I had to read them twice.
ReplyDeleteRichard