Thursday, April 26, 2012

Stars Fall, Sun Rises...


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
and shared with Haiku Heights..





Tempted stars
fall for lovely earth;
Sun rises..


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Temptation
to pluck the flower;
she plucks it


 
withering
 flower loses smile;
she has it..



RS:)

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19 comments:

  1. PranitaApril 26, 2012 at 11:38 PM

    This haiku brought a smile on my face... lovely :)
    Rosy lips of temptation - A Haiku

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  2. A Bit of the BlarneyApril 27, 2012 at 3:52 AM

    I especially like your first Haiku. Offers hope!!! Have a wonderful day! Cathy

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  3. rebeccaApril 27, 2012 at 6:25 AM

    yes remesh....today your beautiful haiku make the sunrise!

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  4. rebeccaApril 27, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    forgive me ramesh i typed so quickly i entered an e where an a was needed!!!

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  5. PattiKenApril 27, 2012 at 7:30 AM

    Nice, especially the first.

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  6. anthonynorthApril 27, 2012 at 7:42 AM

    Are the cycle of us and a flower. Nice one.

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  7. Sri ValliApril 27, 2012 at 7:43 AM

    Beautiful set! I liked the second one as I could relate to it....If I see any beautiful flower, I want it in my hand...

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  8. KarenApril 27, 2012 at 8:47 AM

    Lovely haiku! I try not to pick the flowers.

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  9. LenoraApril 27, 2012 at 10:58 AM

    what a great last line, a surprise!

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  10. debuApril 27, 2012 at 11:00 AM

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  11. debuApril 27, 2012 at 11:00 AM

    Between she plucks it and she has it.. i could see/ feel a range of emothions thoughts and life experiences.. i loved this set RS, especially the tempted stars falling for earth...the sun must be the luckiest one then !

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  12. joanneApril 27, 2012 at 11:20 AM

    lovely images.....sad about the plucked and withered flower..

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  13. Mohini PuranikApril 27, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    So beautiful, and pleasant link spring's pleasant flowers...:)

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  14. LauraApril 27, 2012 at 1:20 PM

    beautiful...no easy choice, to pluck or just admire as it is.

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  15. LibbyApril 27, 2012 at 3:03 PM

    This is flirty and romantic...temptation to pluck the flower; she plucks it.

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  16. carol l mckennaApril 27, 2012 at 3:36 PM

    'daisies don't tell' ~ lovely nature haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  17. Fran aka RedondowriterApril 27, 2012 at 10:11 PM

    Ah, I feel as though I experienced this with you--and with she.

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  18. MaritApril 28, 2012 at 12:43 AM

    I love the story you tell in your haiku... again, you amaze me with your talent. Enjoy your weekend!

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  19. LeaApril 28, 2012 at 3:22 PM

    This is just so lovely... from star to smile... thank you!

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