Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Other Stays Quiet..



April 26, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge

 
Prompt: Melody


Ah. I float;
God sings in my head,
gifts me world

I cry out  loud;
melody for mom, for the
 other stays quiet

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Title of  one of my posts  inspired this haiku..
It's a stroy of my birth as a twin..
here's the poem of 93 lines...you won't stop till you complete..promise me..
here http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2010/08/osi-and-haiku-heights.html


RS:)

15 comments:

  1. "I cry out loud;
    melody for mom", loved this!, yes sir we'll read your poem :)

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  2. After a wonderful Haiku like this, missing the poem wudb a crime! M off to ur poem now! :)

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  3. Powerful haiku ~ Wow! ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  4. A special haiku of yours today. Thank you. (and I will read your long poem)

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  5. This is a wonderful set of haiku. Well composed.

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  6. 'Mom' is the word, you'll never go wrong! Great haiku, Ramesh!

    Hank

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  7. And what, my friend, is that song of God? Words? Melody only? A little of both?

    Cloud Singer, Come

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  8. Love the idea of god singing in your head! Ramesh, I always knew you had a special connection.

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  9. This was so awesome.
    Mom is a melody always.. even when she shouts, she is music, a tint of prayer in every word is speaks :)
    LOve this Haiku !!!
    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  10. melody for mom...Yes, Very beautiful haiku :)

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  11. So touching, now I understand...

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  12. Poignant yet joyful! You are always surrounded by the Divine Love of your twin! Appreciate your sharing, and the longer poem as well!

    Day 26 ~~ "Humming Lullabies"

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  13. The second haiku really grabs at the heart. Lovely.

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