April 26, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge
Prompt: Melody
Ah. I float;
God sings in my head,
gifts me world
I cry out loud;
melody for mom, for the
other stays quiet
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Title of one of my posts inspired this haiku..
It's a stroy of my birth as a twin..
here's the poem of 93 lines...you won't stop till you complete..promise me..
here http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2010/08/osi-and-haiku-heights.html
RS:)
other stays quiet
***
Title of one of my posts inspired this haiku..
It's a stroy of my birth as a twin..
here's the poem of 93 lines...you won't stop till you complete..promise me..
here http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2010/08/osi-and-haiku-heights.html
RS:)
"I cry out loud;
ReplyDeletemelody for mom", loved this!, yes sir we'll read your poem :)
After a wonderful Haiku like this, missing the poem wudb a crime! M off to ur poem now! :)
ReplyDeletePowerful haiku ~ Wow! ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteA special haiku of yours today. Thank you. (and I will read your long poem)
ReplyDeleteVery nice...Thanks ~
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful set of haiku. Well composed.
ReplyDelete'Mom' is the word, you'll never go wrong! Great haiku, Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteHank
And what, my friend, is that song of God? Words? Melody only? A little of both?
ReplyDeleteCloud Singer, Come
Love the idea of god singing in your head! Ramesh, I always knew you had a special connection.
ReplyDeleteThis was so awesome.
ReplyDeleteMom is a melody always.. even when she shouts, she is music, a tint of prayer in every word is speaks :)
LOve this Haiku !!!
~Keep the Spark ALive..
melody for mom...Yes, Very beautiful haiku :)
ReplyDeleteSo touching, now I understand...
ReplyDeletePoignant yet joyful! You are always surrounded by the Divine Love of your twin! Appreciate your sharing, and the longer poem as well!
ReplyDeleteDay 26 ~~ "Humming Lullabies"
lovely one RS...lovely... :)
ReplyDeleteThe second haiku really grabs at the heart. Lovely.
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