Saturday, April 28, 2012

A Different Road..

April 29, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge



I and my family are in the process of relocating to the
other side of our beautiful city...with packing in progress
hence, haven't been able to visit
blogs of many friends..which I will do positively as and when I can..
But that shouldn't refrain you from
leaving your comments and feedback.. it emboldens...Thanx..God bless!!!


A Different Road..


Unfulfilled;
dreams gleam faintly in
vacant space;

New dreams shine
unabashedly;
heights to climb

A different raod;
I am on my way to meet
my better 'self', yes!


RS:)

19 comments:

  1. Very philosophical but natural expression about the new changes in life..:). I really feel sometimes similar, relating every small and big situation with philosophy. By this expression a new joy is discovered in the pain of change.

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  2. Very deep and inspiring, Ramesh ji! A very good piece of advice for our generation people..
    Cheers! :)

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  3. that was a great one sir...lovely... :)

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  4. "New dreams shine". I like that very much as we all like to see this happening now and again. Good luck in your new home - may you and your family be very happy there. I have enjoyed writing with you this past month.

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  5. Nice...I specially like the last one... I hope to meet my better self every day ~

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  6. life in so few words ~ excellent ~ good luck with your move ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. Inspiring set of haiku Ramesh. I can sense a deeper meaning.

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  8. Ramesh, NOW THAT'S what I call a MOVING set. Lovely

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  9. Lovely haiku, despite your preoccupation. May I wish you every happiness in your new home.

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  10. packing in progress
    ramesh is moving his house
    to the beat of poems

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  11. I am on my way to meet
    my better 'self', yes!


    It took a great move to arrive at your better self- I see!

    May these wonderful beginnings bring you everything you need!

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  12. Very motivating haiku ...and the last one is so gr8 while reading....It's pumping new energy in me!

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  13. May your new home be filled with blessings, memories and much much love.x

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  14. beautiful. intense.i loved it!!:)

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