April 3, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..
Prompt: Harbour
A Relenting Earth
Earth hides behind clouds;
does not harbour any grudge
golden Sun rises
Golden Sun rises;
quietly peeps through the dark clouds,
a relenting Earth...
A relenting Earth;
ah, nature never harbours
any ill feelings...
RS:)
wow... 3 haiku almost covered the true beauty and character of the entire nature.. loved it.. :)
ReplyDeletean excellent set of Haiku...beautiful description of the true colors of nature... :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this post very much. One of the lines I especially like is "a relenting Earth"
ReplyDeleteand she relents particularly to us, does she not?
any ill feelings???? beautiful set of Haiku Rameshji.. :-)
ReplyDeleteshe doesn't, she is generous ~
ReplyDeleteExcellent ~ very inspiring and well done ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted haiku trio Ramesh.
ReplyDeletewe should all do our part to save mother earth to prevent calamities...excellent haiku and a reminder for all of us to take care of mother earth...thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeletegood 1 sir ... i m learning a lot from u :) thanku :)
ReplyDeleteSo blissful.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set....Yes! nature doesn't harbors any ill feelings...Awesome point :)
ReplyDeleteIt sometimes seems that nature harbours ill-feelings towards us: tsunami, hurricanes, drought and disease.
ReplyDeleteBut your haiku chain is beautiful anyway.
V
Nice set of haiku! But about ill feelings of nature, I agree with Vivinfrance.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted haiku on "a relenting earth"
ReplyDeleteI love this...
ReplyDeletethank you...
Peace
Siggi of Downeast Maine
Beautifully expressed, Ramesh!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing!!!
This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.